- Aug 29, 2019
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Project:
It's a post dystopian fantasy VN trying to be a slice-of-life for an overworked soldier/guardsman that decides to hire a maid. Hijinks ensue.
Developer Author:
Me
Looking for:
Someone to proofread the initial first draft as well as provide a 'pulse check' to see if the idea has legs.
Employment Type:
Unpaid, but a firm thank for the help regardless of where the project goes.
Work commitment:
I'm at ~85 screen pages or ~15k words. Probably around 1-2 hours of reading for a single go.
Preferred method of contact:
This thread.
Job Description:
Basically I'm looking for someone who can read the script of the first couple days and offer feedback before I start doing the renders to make sure I'm not wasting my time on something that A: isn't interesting, and B: isn't at least somewhat unique. Don't want to slap this together only to find out from players that I rewrote an episode of dragonball z or something embarrassing like that.
Additional comments:
I've attached the script PDF for anyone interested. Feel free to roast, toast or anything in between in the comments. Thanks for the help regardless.
It's a post dystopian fantasy VN trying to be a slice-of-life for an overworked soldier/guardsman that decides to hire a maid. Hijinks ensue.
Me
Looking for:
Someone to proofread the initial first draft as well as provide a 'pulse check' to see if the idea has legs.
Employment Type:
Unpaid, but a firm thank for the help regardless of where the project goes.
Work commitment:
I'm at ~85 screen pages or ~15k words. Probably around 1-2 hours of reading for a single go.
Preferred method of contact:
This thread.
Job Description:
Basically I'm looking for someone who can read the script of the first couple days and offer feedback before I start doing the renders to make sure I'm not wasting my time on something that A: isn't interesting, and B: isn't at least somewhat unique. Don't want to slap this together only to find out from players that I rewrote an episode of dragonball z or something embarrassing like that.
Additional comments:
I've attached the script PDF for anyone interested. Feel free to roast, toast or anything in between in the comments. Thanks for the help regardless.