I sent you a reply, I watched your game, and I wrote an corrected English response, I sent it to you as a message. Check your inputs. I also asked from what language to what other language you wanted to translate too.
I’m glad you chose to participate in my story.
The, story of my life.
First, let me introduce myself. Or passive: If I may, allow me to introduce myself.
Pardon me, actually, I am without a name. But, you may call me …
Thoughts apparently are expressed by parenthesis, and actions maybe expressed by beginning and ending with asterisk. Is the character not talking to the viewer? If the character is talking then remove the parenthesis.
(It’s been almost 8 years, since I last visited my hometown.)
I find it exhausting to live alone.
(Now that I have completed highschool.)
Change sequence have him say he completed H.S., and that he finds it exhausting to live alone now.
I have decided to return to my hometown, and family.
The phone rings or gets a text signal, character pardon’s his distraction, refers to the phone.
Excuse me, my Mom sent this as a graduation gift.
I am eager to see her again.
It has been a quite some time since I last looked through my old photo album.
Mom may have uploaded my photographs to the phone.
Wait, who is this?
I remember, it is Aunt Laya.
Aunt Laya, is the archetypical or even the quintessential single mother. Overprotective yet detached?
Unfortunately, there was this incident, she probably still holds a grudge against me for.
Her son (name) and I were drinking wine, and she caught us. Ever since then she thinks I
Am corrupting her “little” angel.
We were too young to drink, but our curiosity was strong. We succumbed to the temptation.
Stealing the wine, and believing we were hiding sharing co-conspiratorially the forbidden wine.
My cousin, her son, was the one who offered the wine to me in the first place!
I hope, we can resolve our differences, I don’t want her to hate me forever.
When I return, I hope we can resolve our differences, and put this history behind us.
Hmmm…. Looking through the album, who is next?
This is Cissy. Cissy is my older sister. She has such a gorgeous body. I honestly don’t understand
Why she isn’t looking into a modeling gig, part time even?
She is always fashionable, coordinating her outfits and accessories. She looks great in anything she wears.
This, is Maya. My loving, caring, and beautiful mother.
She is a very selfless woman, always thinking of the welfare of others before herself.
There is so much I could say about her, but even an entire day would not suffice.
She has always showered me with love and affection.
When I get home, I will show my appreciation for all she has done for me.
<Meanwhile back home.>
Maya: How is working treating you honey?
Dad: Well, it has been so-so. I manage, things are going ok.
Mom: Do you remember what day it is tomorrow honey?
Dad: Uhhh
Mom: Tell me honey, do you remember?
Mom: It’s a very special day in our life.
Dad: A very special, day?
Dad: (Why do women cling onto these ridiculous non-tangible things so much?)
Dad: (No wonder I have lost so much hair since we’ve been married!)
Dad: Of course I remember, it’s the day I asked for your hand in marriage.
Dad: Did you think I would forget about it?
Mom: Oh Honey! I am so glad you remember our special moments.
Mom: By the way, there is another special event tomorrow.
Mom: Let’s see if you can guess this one too.
Dad: (Well isn’t that just swell.)
Dad: uh, hmmmmmm? No, sorry.
Dad: I give up, I cannot seem to remember.
Mom: Its ok.
Mom: (name) is coming home honey. He’s completed his education.
Dad: Oh, when do you think he will arrive?
Mom: Tomorrow Jason, he just called earlier.
Mom: He said he finished his packing, and that he is waiting to board his flight now.
Dad: (Finally I can make a decent man out of that boy.)
Dad: Now that he has completed high school, I want him to take over our business Maya.
Dad: At last (name) can continue my legacy as a businessman!
Mom: Honey, may I suggest something?
Dad: Hmmm?
Mom: Please don’t force (name) to take over your business, honey.
Dad: Why? Has something happened? Now that he has completed high school, I want him to learn the ropes!
Mom: I am not objecting to the idea. But please, promise me that you won’t force him to live out your dreams.
Mom: I want him to have some time off. He’s just completed his education in a distant town, all alone.
Mom: I promise that I will nudge him towards taking over the company. First I want him to have some recreational time.
Dad: FINE! If you say so, I’ll leave him up to you Maya.
Mom: Thank you honey.
Mom: Honey.
Dad: Not now Maya! Let’s continue this discussion in the morning. I have got to get some sleep for tomorrow’s meeting.
Mom: Maybe, I‘ll help you release some stress!
Dad: What are you up to now? (Plotting)
Mom: Well… it has been some time since we have fooled around!
Mom: And I want to feel you inside me, Jason.
Dad: Maya… We’re as old as pine trees.
Dad: Aren’t you ashamed of yourself?
Mom: But?
Dad: Our children are all grown up.
Dad: We have to focus on their future.
Mom: But honey!
Mom: (sigh) Yes honey, you are right.
Mom: We have to focus on our children.
Dad: That’s good. I’m glad we are on the same page.
Dad: Look, I’m too tired Maya. I am going to sleep.
Dad: Good Night Maya.
Mom: Yes Jason. I have so much to do tomorrow, for (name) arrival.
Mom: Good night honey.
Mom: (It’s been so many years, so long….)
Mom: (I will finally get to see (name) again tomorrow.)
Mom: ( I wonder what he looks like now that he is all grown up?)
Mom: (Will he be as handsome as his father back in the day?)
Mom: Mmmmmm
Mom: Why do I feel… so aroused?)
Mom: (Oh yes!) (I can feel my pussy tingling…)
Mom: (What’s happening to me?)
Mom: (Uughh … My pussy is aching …)
Mom: (What is this place?)
Mom: (My limbs feel so heavy!)
Mom: (Its as if someone was holding me?)
Mom: (Am I dreaming? Is this a dream?)
Mom: Wait! What is this place? Where am I?
Mom: (Why am I naked?)
Mom: (I’m naked!) (Someone’s hands are touching my breasts!)
Mom: (ooooh! He is pressing so hard.)
Mom: Ahhhh what???
Mom: oooHHHHH my
Mom: OOOHH! Wa- wait.
Mom: Who, who are mmmMMM! Yes!
Mom: (He feels so big inside me, so good)
Mom: oh yes, my pussy, he’s stretching me. So good, filling me!
Mom: Ohhh ! Who are Ahhhh !
Mom: Yes, yes more!
Mom: Oh ugh, yes, his cock so good, it feels good deep inside me!
Mom: I need this, it has been so long. So long since someone fucked me, yes I love it, fuck me!
Mom: mmmm Ugh ooooh! Squish, slish, squish
Mom: Uhhh UGHHH! Oooh yes. Take me!
Mom: Fuck my pussy, ugh, yes, like that, just like that!
Dad: Honey?
Mom: Uughh Yes! Yes! Yes! Yeeeessss! Ooooh! Ohhhhhh!
Mom: Fuck my tight pussy!
Mom: (This can’t be right? I don’t even know you?)
Mom: (So good! You feel so good inside me!)
Mom: Yes! Yes! Don’t stop! Don’t you dare stop!
Mom: Yes! Fuck, keep keep fucking me! Oh my pussy, so good!
Mom: Oh! Yeah baby! That’s it yeah!
Mom: (I don’t know who this is… But, he feels so so good inside me!)
Dad: HONEY?
Mom: Ohhh! Deeper… YES! Right there!
Mom: Mmmmmmhmmmm!
Mom: Yes! Yes, make me cum all over your big hard cock!
Dad: HONEY! Wake up!
Dad: Honey?
Mom: Mmmmmmmhhh
Mom: Huhhhhh?
Dad: Are you alright?
Mom: (Uhhh was that a dream?)
Mom: (Wow! My ooh my. That was a weird dream, I slept with another rman other than Jason?)
Mom: Who was that guy?
Mom: (I can still feel his touch. How he caressed my body)
Mom: (how he felt inside me. My pussy is swollen, so wet, I am dripping)
Dad: Maya, are you okay?
Dad: What happened? Are you not well?
Mom: No, no it’s alright.
Dad: Are you sure? Do we need to see a doctor?
Mom: Yes, I am fine. I just had a bad dream is all….
Dad: If you say so.
MEANWHILE
Name: (Hmmm I miss my family so much!)
Name: (Huh? How is it already so dark?)
Name: (Time for some shut eye, I have such a big day ahead of me tomorrow.)
Name: **Sigh**
Name: (If mom were here, she would give me a goodnight kiss!)
Name: (I really miss them)
Name: (No problem, I am certain she already has a lot of kisses saved up for me.)
Name: (I will balance those books tomorrow ha!)
Name: (Goodnight to me.)
Narrator: *You slowly drift off to sleep.*
-THE NEXT DAY-
Name: Ugh!
Name: (Finally… I am home.)
Name: (Man, that flight was a pain in the ass.)
Name: (That aside, I really missed this place.)
Name: (I wonder if everyone will be glad to see me. I am back now, after so many years?
Name: (Same small town, just like I remember.) (It doesn’t look like much has changed.)
Name: (Once I get settled in… Maybe I can do some exploring, some of my old haunts?)
Name: (There is bound to be something new.)
Name: (Wait, let me double check the address, just in case 32309, check!)
Name: (So, I am not lost. A good start.)
Name: (It looks a little different. Mom did say that she had renovated some parts of the house. That may be why it looks a tad off.)
Narrator: *You inhale deeply, allowing the air to carry a wave of fond memories, the scents are familiar and comforting.*
Name: (Ahh… Nostalgia, here I come!) (The weather seems very nice today too!)
Name: Let’s go in!
Name: (The garden looks healthy but untended.)
Name: (Something I shall need to take care of when I have some free time.)
Name: (Alright, let’s make everyone squeal in surprise!) (Come on… open the door?)
Name: (What is taking them so long to open the door?)
Name: (Maybe, they are preparing something special for me?)
Name: (I want to surprise them, but then, they want to surprise me too!)
Name: (That kind of thing?) (Maybe they didn’t hear me ring, the first time?
Name: Huh? (I don’t think that is what the door bell is supposed to sound like.)
Name: (Did I break it?) (Oh, it’s my phone! But who would be calling me?)
Name: (Oh, its Mom. Why is she calling now, while I am literally right outside the door?)
Name: (Hmmmmm) (Best way to find out, is to answer the phone!)
Mom: Hello (Name) Where are you?
(Name) Hey mom, I’m just outside the house.
Mom: (Name)
Name: Is the doorbell broken, I’m, waiting outside right now.
Mom: Sweety wait
Name: Hey, come on mom!
Mom: I
Name: I want to see you.
Mom: (Name)
Mom: Just relax, (Name). Listen to me first! Just relax. My boy.
Name: (Oh boy. She hasn’t gone crazy has she?)
Name: Uh Yeah, ok mom.
Mom: We aren’t home (Name). I’m sorry, sweetheart.
Name: What? What happened, what are you apologizing for?
Mom: Honey, I’m not home.
Name: Oh, it’s ok. Should I call dad then?
Mom: No (name), your dad is with me now.
Name: What the fuck!
Mom: (name), watch your language. Don’t forget that you are talking with your mother.
Name: Sorry mom. But seriously though. Where are you, where did you go?
Name: You knew I was coming today, and it’s been so long since I’ve seen you and yet you leave me outside?
Mom: I am extremely sorry dear.
Name: No, it’s fine. I just want to know what’s happening.
Mom: Well, your sister called us last night. She sounded so desperate.
Name: What? What happened to Cissy? Is she alright? I’ll come over.
Mom: Hey now! Calm down. It’s nothing to worry about son. She is fine. You needn’t worry.
Mom: We are here to support your sister.
