VN - Ren'Py - Lost & Found [v0.9] [Jun1or72]

Pros

• A good story emphasizing incest & polyamorous. MC will have sex with numerous females. Especially three generations mother, grandma and sisters.
• Fairly good quality of image renders.
• Excellent quality of animations.
• Playability, performance and are all just OK no issue
• Good lewd sound / voice.

Cons

• Sound: Almost no sound except background music.
• Lack of genuine or more of fictitious for sexuality starting with the first one Marion as well with everyone.
• Lack of seductiveness in sexual approach.
• Exaggerated / buildup for the MC introduction with the new life; but no justifications like MC’s some extraordinary skills/talent etc.
• Poor grammar / sentence forming.
• More dramatic right from the prolog.

Lost & Found [v0.9] [Jun1or72]

Pro:

• LIs are hot.
• A lot of sex scenes.
• Not much drama but it handles the one it has in a way better fashion than the OG game this one is based on.
• Story is rather fast paced; the game is basically a nukige.
• MC genuinely loves and cares for his girls.

Con:

• MC could be a bit better; the girls want to fuck him and he gets surprised by this every single time.
• The dev removed the incest and I had to manually gointo the script and fix it.
• Some very weird sentences and sentence structure in the script that I had to fix too.

Conclusion:

A way better take on the OG game. It's fast pace and fun and has tons of hot girls for MC for fuck. Don't expect Shakespeare but a fast paced incest game where you fuck you family and more.

Pro's:
-Models look nice
-Sex Scenes are animated well and fairly abundant
-Lack of real drama can be nice for those of us who want a break from it

Con's:
-Story is rather fast paced with nothing new to keep people hooked
-Lack of drama can be quite the negative for those who seek it in their erotic stories
-Sex Scenes could be longer (Currently half a dozen to a dozen lines each)

Overall:
For a first game I'd say it's a solid 3/5 Star average game, it's neither great nor terrible and I would very much be interested in seeing how the developer improves.

Hmm, where do I start? This is not going to be a positive review, so if you do not want to read it, then move on.

The writing is terrible. There is no character development and no suspense, drama, or storytelling. It jumps right into your mom is not dead, and I will hire you, without any story leading up to how the boss lady found you. Also, there is no suspenseful build-up to realizing your mother will be your boss. It is just wham bam, thank you, mam. There are no background stories for any main characters except for a few cliche fantasy troupes about fathers and families. I am not sure why this even has three stars. It feels like a horny 13-year-old has written this without any creative writing skills. Also, the story is a complete rip-off of many other titles without original ideas. I am not trolling, just stating facts and this is not an English is my second language issue either, it is just poor writing.

Other issues:

VN advertises you can select your relationships. This is entirely false.
The MC is a terrible design. He looks like a Hobo.
Relationships are poorly designed.
There are many weird anomalies in renders.

Probably the best example of wank material on this site. Visually it's great, even with the limitations of the engine/style. The sex scenes are animated well, the lighting is great. The models look very similar to each other, which lends itself almost perfectly to just meaningless wank material. The story is kinetic, and also sucks, so it's very easy to skip past it and just get to the meaningless sex. The story definitely pretends it's good and emotional, but it really is just absolute melodramatic garbage.

Couldn't make it 5 minutes through this disasterpiece. Where do I even begin? Renders are fairly mediocre, there's straight-up missing CGs during the phone call with Marion (which is ~2mins in), but the worst of it is the writing.
Marion calls the MC with a job offer that sounds like a bloody cult or pyramid scheme ("come work for us, we've already taken care of all your debt and we'll also handle all of your living expenses while you're with us; I assure you that your life will change for the better"). The MC's supposed to be mature and independent, having had to grow up faster as a result of his neglectful, drunk father. But the moment he sees Marion he leers at her incessantly (even going so far as to imagine her in lingerie, and then all but naked), and somehow, someway, Marion isn't disgusted by him being a complete creep. Then after a quick conversation about the job (which again, sounds sketchy as all hell), she catches the MC staring at her tits again, and again she just laughs it off and thinks it's flattering. Then she takes the MC to the hotel room he'll be staying in for the night and basically says "so I like how sleazy you were, let's fuck".
No lead-in, no build-up, completely nonsensical and unrealistic flaming dog shit level of writing. Don't even waste your time.

Would give this 3.5 if I could so 3 feels more fair to me.

Disclaimed I haven't finished the game yet but I played enough to have mix feeling. I'll be upfront im not into harems but the story in this one grabbed me attention .

TLDR : if you like harem + incest this is the game for you. It's enjoyable for what it is. Would of been better to me if it wasnt a forced harem game but a harem if you choose for it to be one. As it has a pretty romantic plot with the first girl. Especially because the relationships and harems comes to fast and feels way to forced for my taste. But I can still enjoy something I have issues with or dont like entirely.

Pro's
Lots of content
Pretty Looking girls for Honey Select
lots of red heads
decent looking renders and animations

Cons
Kinetic Novel

Relationships + Harem past the first girl feels very forced to me. Almost was enough for me consider dropping this game but I still enjoyed it for what it is.
I thought there was decent enough plot there that it would of made for a better story if just all about Kylie since she did not feel forced. Or at least give you the option to pick who you want to include in said harem

Forced harem do to it being a Kinetic novel . So you have no choice on who to include in said harem or if you even want to have a harem because of lack of choice do to it being a Kinetic Novel.

i have to admit that, like the person who left the review before me, i was originally drawn in by the look of the honey select characters (redheads are super cute) so i gave this one a shot! i was liking the game and the look of it seemed crisp and clean (maybe honey select 2 models over the old honey select made it look that way)! im a sucker for the tan lines and pubic hair that honey select characters tend to have over more hyper realistic looking models, so this was a huge plus for me!

unfortunately, i have to point out the elephant in the room! as other reviewers have mentioned, the plot/story kinda falls short! it also seems like this story was a rehash of the plot from "My New Family"! there its been said! i mean the whole alcoholic father keeping his son away from his mom and they reunite and he just happens to have 2 sisters and one went through a traumatic experience... its too close to not at least be the inspiration for the story! its not a complete copy of MNF as at least the finer details have been changed and the two sisters from MNF are basically combined into one here and the second sister is more of an original character that doesnt see a whole lot of development!

that being said, its not a bad game and at first i was pretty well invested! however around the point where a certain character shaves her cooter, i kinda started feeling like the story was dragging along! i was hoping something would happen that would spark my interest again but it continued to drag until the point where i ended up skipping content just to see the naughty bits! if i could offer any suggestions, id say the dev needs to work on the story pacing and going forward try giving us something that will make this title stand out from MNF!

score:
art/renders- 9/10
story- 2/10
gameplay- 5/10
lewd scenes- 9/10

UPDATE to review for v0.9
so most everything in my review stays the same, but i thought id make a note here that as development progresses more and more of the LIs are getting upgrades to their renders and look good except for the fact that everyone has seemed to decide to shave their pubic hair! i know its a small detail but it was part of the charm of the game when i first started playing! i loved the way the characters looked and the tan lines with pubic hair look was really doing it for me! with the updated look everyone is getting better hair and smother faces yet the one thing i didnt want to see smoothed out was their bikini line!
the story hasnt really improved either as i still find myself wondering when the dialogue will end or when someone will get to the point! it almost feels like the dev has a minimum word limit he needs to fill with each update and lewd scenes suffer the penalty for it!
still like these characters but something needs to happen in the story because its dragging along too much at times.

As I have said in many games, everything that has to do with honey sleect catches my attention and in this game that was what impacted me the most...

I must say that the synopsis did not have many details, and well the story, to be honest, is made very randomly and with little context (With all due respect to the creator), but it has its good things.

THE GOOD
The truth is, what I liked most about the game is the design/render of the waifus in the game, they are super well done, I really appreciate that, because normally in most games you find characters that are a little flat, but in this one The waifus are all excellent in their design.
Something that also stands out is that the story was quite fast, from moment 1 everything was at 100 km/h. The number of waifus with whom you interact is quite a lot and the mini arcs or stories within it are quite short so you don't get tired of the melodrama of most games of this style.
We must be frank, the story itself is poorly written, that is, there is little context and the things that happen make no sense. I mean the story has no logic at all, at least in a vn game I look for a good story and if I'm honest this one is not bad but it is not good, the simple fact that from moment 1 everything already escalated very Fast can be excessive, but let's say that the charm of the game is that everything goes fast enough for the player to reach those +18 scenes.
On the other hand, speaking of a VN type game, this "game" would be a 100% visual novel, in fact it has nothing in terms of gameplay, because it doesn't even give you the option to choose dialogues or things like that, which is Thank you if what you are looking for is a short story that has good scenes, this might not be considered good, but it is something to point out.
At the beginning of the game, it takes you a while to get those +18 scenes, but afterward it has a lot of content.

THE BAD... or not?
-We must be frank, the story itself is poorly written, that is, there is little context and the things that happen make no sense. I mean the story has no logic at all, at least in a vn game I look for a good story and if I'm honest this one is not bad but it is not good, the simple fact that from moment 1 everything already escalated very Fast can be excessive, but let's say that the charm of the game is that everything goes fast enough for the player to reach those +18 scenes.
-On the other hand, speaking of a VN type game, this "game" would be a 100% visual novel, in fact it has nothing in terms of gameplay, because it doesn't even give you the option to choose dialogues or things like that, which is Thank you if what you are looking for is a short story that has good scenes, this might not be considered good, but it is something to point out.
-As everything moves very quickly, many things do not make sense and as it seems that more and more characters are involved, some others are forgotten in the plot, let's say that this can be a bad thing, because if one becomes attached to a character (which seems to will have an impact on history) and we see that later it doesn't come out anymore, because many of us would feel disappointed.


-The truth is that it is the first project of this creator, I must congratulate him, for my part, he gets some applause. This more than all because of the renders, they are super well done, leaving aside the story that is not entirely well structured, the background music, the renders, the character designs, everything is very well done.
What I can tell the creator is that perhaps in his next game (after this one is finished), he will consider structuring a more solid story, because its visual already draws the attention of the public and if he manages to create something quite solid it would attract much more people.

Today, I played until version 0.7.5. Would I recommend the game to you? The truth is, yes. Even though the story doesn't make much sense, it is fast and if what you are looking for is something visually good and not very long stories, this game is for you. Besides, this game has a lot of +18 content, so you will find what you are looking for here and not just pure text.

Summary (SCORE: 7.2)
o Character Design/Visual: 9/10
o Background music/sound: 9/10
o Plot: 3/10
o Animation: 9/10
o +18 Scenes: 8/10
o Gameplay: 3/10
o Interface: 10/10

I don't read any reviews before downloading and playing so it's my honest view.
Writer of the text have zero skill in writing, that was my first impression.
I don't really pay much attention to renders' quality but after some time I began to see the similarities. That game is a bad clone of "My new family" but without all good that is in MNF.
Dev certainly has no idea how to write a VN but he watched a lot of porn. So game is like a porn movie. MC sees a girl/woman, MC wants a girl/woman (reason for this... do we need one?), MC and girl/woman are fucking (what a dumb question again - why? 'Cause it's a porn game, so it's porn you see). Show a new girl, repeat. Story? Reason? Choices? There's no such things in porn movie. And this is a porn movie. That is clearly a clone of MNF. Only it's porn movie clone. You know, like Romeo and Juliette porn movie. That's the same for MNF here.
Congratulations, killer7, your game impressed people enough to make a porn movie out of it.

Lol.
Lmao even.

Yep. This game definitely has its influences completely glued to its sleeves. I don't mind that too much. If there was one thing MNF did wrong, was it being needlessly padded with way too much dialogue.

Lost and Found on the other hand does not care about things like "pace" or "character traits" or "narrative cohesion" and instead rockets by in break-neck speed. Here's your mom, here's your half-sisters, one of them is really moody, nevermind you have history, now you're fucking, now you're fucking the other sister, now you're fucking your mom, now you're fucking your secret third sister that came out of nowhere, now you're fucking your aunt, your cousin, your grandma, every woman you work with, kick your halfsisters father's ass, now it is time for an orgy.

It feels like watching a porno, where everyone of the cast and crew had somewhere to be, and was like "okay, I know we just started but let's wrap this shit up. I'm hungry, and I don't wanna miss the Superbowl."
Conflicts arise and gets resolved in minutes, none of the characters have any simmering tension before everyone is just fine with family-wide harem incest. "We don't have time for this shit, we have nachos to eat and halftime shows to mock."

It doesn't exactly help that there is a noticeable amount of grammar problems, and that none of the characters feel distinct, dialogue-wise. Writing is hard, and I don't actually doubt that there was effort put into this, it just feels like there wasn't when the story is set on being told immediately. It makes it feel like the author only wanted to minimize the amount of renders they needed to make, and then chose to write around that instead.

The game is pretty funny, unfortunately not for the correct reasons. It all just becomes so unbelievably implausible that it becomes kinda hilarious. The renders and the models are pretty hot for HS models, and I do have a soft spot for redheads.

My stance on this is that while I can't give it a high score, I will say that I did enjoy my time with the game, through the good and especially through the bad.

MNF clone, but without 80% of annoying and pointless dialogue, but with some nice ideas from there, like taking bath with five woman at the same time. Some woman will spread their legs for you after couple of compliments, I'm ok with it. And models are prettier. Honestly, it's all right.

English is not my first language expect a few errors

The game is very beautiful and has good animation . The story isn't groundbreaking, but it manages to save itself in terms of humor, which is excellent.

The characters are almost copy and paste between them which is expected of a family but they manage to be distinctive at the same time which is a good thing, the main character has a good appearance but strange in a certain aspect of the face.

As for the pace of the game, I think it's too fast, there's too much development in the relationships in too little time, which makes it seem like it was done in a hurry, it should have a slower pace to make the formation of relationships between them more natural.

All in all, the game is great and deserves to be followed closely.
v 0.7

A simple and breezy story, the plot of incest and pure love doesn't beat around the bush. While not designed for strong confrontation, the overall narrative is relaxing. Players who enjoy fulfilling their sexual fantasies may want to try a simple, enjoyable game like this once in a while. For me, evaluating an erotic game requires some "special" perspective, and this game fulfills its purpose of a sexual relationship, so it's a pass, three stars. In addition, I played it to relax and enjoy the purest satisfaction, I was very happy, so I added a star.

I'll start off with something positive. The art and animations are done well.

The story itself is awful. It's a cheap knock off of another game. You can never become emotional invested in the characters because the story sounds like it was written by a 12 year old. Here's your hotel room, lets have sex, I'm horny. The writing brings down the entire game. I feel sorry for the artist. The writer tries to bring in heavy topics to get you emotionally invested. However, it's rushed and comes across as if nobody cares. It's all so matter of fact rather then engaging. By the way, your mother is alive... OMG, that's amazing, lets have sex.

If your looking for a quick fap, download the game, crack the gallery, get in a quick fap, and delete it when you are done. The rest of it isn't worth anything.

This is the corniest game I have ever played. The dialogue, the story, the character....I'm sorry to be so negative, but you need proofreaders and someone to bounce this dialogue off of STAT.
At least the girls are cute, even if the MC is some horrible hairy ape-man hybrid.

A harem themed game like so many other on this website: MC gotta fuck them all and manages to do so despite everything. This is just your run of the mill harem game if you are after is multiple LIs, not so much blueball or teasing and quite straight to fuck kind of AVN. No bullshit, so no slow burn. Renders are nice and animations are smooth. Update schedule is reasonable and content is no small amount. Theres already plenty of content as of v0.7

Alright this one's a mess, lets start with the bad

Cons
-It's basically just a complete remake of that other incest harem game, just with the pacing turned up to 11.
-The dialogue is bad. Usually canned, way more sappy than most of the situations call for, and the girls are way too impressed by literally anything.
-The MC looks like a dirty homeless dude with craaaaazy arm and body hair for I think the first 8 chapters or so.
-MC cheats on his main girl with his secretary the morning after he starts dating her, and doesn't even address that in his thoughts once. Has absolutely no concept of loyalty at all.

Pros
-It's basically just a complete remake of that other incest harem game, just with the pacing turned up to 11.
-The dialogue is bad. Usually canned, way more sappy than most of the situations call for, and the girls are way too impressed by literally anything.
-The MC looks like a dirty homeless dude with craaaaazy arm and body hair for I think the first 8 chapters or so.
-MC cheats on his main girl with his secretary the morning after he starts dating her, and doesn't even address that in his thoughts once. Has absolutely no concept of loyalty at all.

Ya I know, it's definitely a mess but no matter how bad it is I'm enjoying every minute of it and stand by my rating. The game is fun and silly, and it's so impossible to take seriously that it's flaws aren't bothersome. Recommended for people who like overly campy stories and 12 year old power fantasies.

As others have noted, it is almost a direct copy of another game. I wonder if it's by the same devs under a different name? That said, it suffers from all the flaws of the original, the most glaring of which is progression of the story. Each of the women falls deeply deeply in love with the MC because he does something reasonably nice for them. I understand that harem games in general have difficulty with seeming realistic, but this is way beyond that. The women in this game act as if a goddess has chosen the MC as her champion and made him irresistible to any woman he talks to for more than 10 minutes. I found the game to be a bit of a yawner because of all that.

I'm upgrading my review a bit. The story continues to have a fairy-tale unreality in terms of the relationships and psychological changes of the characters, as contrasts the fairly realistic imaging, but unlike the game it so strongly resembles, the plot seems less focused on simply manufacturing new story lines to keep the subscriptions flowing in. Time will tell if this game actually tells one coherent story or falls into the doldrums of manufactured conflicts and progressions to maintain the money flow beyond what would be a natural ending place for the story.

hmm.

A better imitation of MNF than Years Later.
But it's becoming more and more like the og. . . like not much new.

It still is a fairly different story so I like that. But the characters are mostly the same.
And I missed the part that informed me that this is a Kinetic Novel. No choices at all so far