I was interested in the game. Sadly the first 10-20 minutes cured me of that.
Poor sentence structure, whiny MC, the same thing being said 4 times, the fact that after beating the bee the mantis fight loss treated me as if Ifailed the first, no manual save, even with text speed set to max the text still felt painfully slow.
The battle system isn't great either nothing get explained before or during the first fight even if it's not very hard to figure it out.
Maybe when the full release comes all this will be fixed but as for now I can't see myself actually playing this.
Art looks good though.