it look realy promising, the story look interesting, and a badass mc who isnt an insuferable pervert is always a good thing , Mio and Olive are truely adorable, Theresa is just to cute and i'm curious to see more of her, Dora got me intrigued despite the obvious hints about her, and the other are nice enough too.
The only thing that realy bothered me was how fast the girls mc met fall for him immediatly when the guy is in town for less than two days, especialy Sylvie.
For Dora it's easy to guess why it happen so fast, Gemma and Olive know mc for far longer than the others, and with some event happening in the update it's understandable that it bring Max and Chloe closer to him (even if they also could be afraid ),Mio i suppose why not, even if
after what happened to her mother i would be more suspicious over stranger in her shoes.
But Sylvie..., at first i was expecting that she was protective over her friend after what happened, later we kind of learn that she act that way because
of some bad experience with guys in the past and yet mc win her over one cheesy line, it looked far to quick and easy.
Also just a quick question over Raven, i see she isnt unlocked in the bio despite that we interact with her and the possibility to gain point with her, is she a real option or just a side girl?
And of course good luck with your project
