Wring issue...
I'm not native English, but I try to make it as clean and understandable as possible. For proofreading I use grammarly, which seems to be very useful in pointing out errors.
Paid proofreading is insanely expensive, especially for a text game that has 500k words and growing. Unfortunately it's not something I can afford at the moment... Hopefully in the future if the project stands out and grows.
Naomi issue...
Naomi is not Cedric's daughter, she is the daughter of a noble couple from Ingmery and she technically don't have to work. She is the rebellious and kinda naive daughter. lol
She's there overnight. People have difficulties with this because of the schedule. She's drinking at the Inn after 8pm.
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Belle issue...
It was actually a good moment to touch Belle issue. I polished and redone a lot of her content in 0.2.1, in the same terms you pointed out. I reread her story and felt this was a little off balance.
Char custom...
I kept the tag because you can customize the protag's personality traits. I felt this meant "character customization", so I left it there. I didn't think this meant just physical customization.
Thanks for the review, praise and constructive criticism are always welcome and I will always use them to improve the game by doing my best.