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Your dedication for details, pregnancy and overall cuteness is next level. =3There is no need for skepticism, you can test this. I did a quickfix, guys.
Sidenote: Also, I'm having fun making these lineage charts for our girls.
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While the CGs are sometimes a bit rough to look at (while I love retro, and agree that highly polished stuff isn't a must have, it looks a bit too dated sometimes) but still better than text only.
Keep up the good work.
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Indeed, it works, You listen to what I had to say, and fixed it,even if I am skeptical, you really did it, and there is a good improvement.Thank you for it, and I will confirm it, if it continues to work, on the next version you make.There is no need for skepticism, you can test this. I did a quickfix, guys.
Sidenote: Also, I'm having fun making these lineage charts for our girls.
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If you want more ideas, of improvement, I can give you some, like it is interesting that in the options, you cannot change the movement function keys to others, like most games, where you can basically personalize the keys.
I will change the review, with the new things you added, in the 4.0
My friend, the game has come that far because of suggestions from you guys. Suggest what you would like, pls. I always appreciate that, frankly.
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Ok, I'll spend some time to write:
-In the future, you should hire a writer, the relationships with the girls, are not good. They are plain, artificial, predictable, boring, and sometimes lacks of reality even on a fantasy game.
Calling every female on contact "Sweet thing" makes you hate him, because you say it to everyone, there is no realism in the relationships, it doesn't matter how grind you make them, using the wait button to repeat the cycle, doesn't make them more valuable, the experiences you make with them in the history, yes.
Girls that are unique, are not tied with grind mechanics, they are tied with good and numerous experiences as quests that could be part of the history, and having kids, it doesn't feel as a good and important mechanic, but a fetish hole to fill.
-Remake the development of the Main Character, you cannot expect, that someone who had a babysitter veteran in the first mission and fight bandits, in the second, you own a castle, in the Third Main mission you "defeat" a Wyvern. Looking cool doesn't give you a good history or argument, just show how immature and newbie as a developer you are. Make Main missions more simple at first, and then keep them growing and developing until it is realistic to achieve those big goals.
-Guild system: There is too much randomness in the quests you give, I understand you want to give something to make people level up, but that's not the way, it is a pain.
"Repeatable quest" should not be focused on grinding, but making small tasks like "Search the wolf den and kill them" "Escort a merchant to another city" "Find the bandits and arrest them" "Go into this cave and get me the reagent" and keep growing from there.
On the first rank, doing 10 mission to level up the rank is fine if there is no randomness, if there is 10 is too much.
On the second rank, 30 points are too low.
-Options: you can make some personalization on keys as a QoL. For now, that's what it could help.
-Remove the level up key in the UI and exchange it for a travel mode key, or if you plan to add some type of management mechanics, a management key. As the game continues to develop, a level up key it doesn't help in the UI, it is better to reserve it as a special key in the character page when the time is right. People will travel more than level up.
-Buy properties: let us buy properties as a way to earn more passive resources and money, this way, the resources can be used to upgrade equipment, places, cities, instead of use gold as every currency, for the castle.
-Mercenary/Knights system: mercenaries need beds, salaries, equipment, food. It is also unrealistic that now we have "soldiers" when we just started to see the world, and we are basically a newbie in every field, not realistic.
-Bestiary: You don't have a proper bestiary with images, weakness, loot, it could be a way to make more quests, and unlock new girls. Like, you need to defeat a particular creature a few times to unlock the complete page, get a bonus, special items, give food to your kids.
-Jail and pillory: Bandits and punishment, it is self-explanatory. Curious, because we have slave-traders.
-Skills: there should be passive skills that help the main character not only for the "Fight & Fuck" but to survive out there. You put us in a world with forests, mountains, bandits, reagents to take, but no basic skill to understand botany, survival, mining, hunt and flay, traps, etc. The same with the use of weapons, magic and more that involves combat.
That's enough, for now.
-In the future, you should hire a writer, the relationships with the girls, are not good. They are plain, artificial, predictable, boring, and sometimes lacks of reality even on a fantasy game.
Calling every female on contact "Sweet thing" makes you hate him, because you say it to everyone, there is no realism in the relationships, it doesn't matter how grind you make them, using the wait button to repeat the cycle, doesn't make them more valuable, the experiences you make with them in the history, yes.
Girls that are unique, are not tied with grind mechanics, they are tied with good and numerous experiences as quests that could be part of the history, and having kids, it doesn't feel as a good and important mechanic, but a fetish hole to fill.
-Remake the development of the Main Character, you cannot expect, that someone who had a babysitter veteran in the first mission and fight bandits, in the second, you own a castle, in the Third Main mission you "defeat" a Wyvern. Looking cool doesn't give you a good history or argument, just show how immature and newbie as a developer you are. Make Main missions more simple at first, and then keep them growing and developing until it is realistic to achieve those big goals.
-Guild system: There is too much randomness in the quests you give, I understand you want to give something to make people level up, but that's not the way, it is a pain.
"Repeatable quest" should not be focused on grinding, but making small tasks like "Search the wolf den and kill them" "Escort a merchant to another city" "Find the bandits and arrest them" "Go into this cave and get me the reagent" and keep growing from there.
On the first rank, doing 10 mission to level up the rank is fine if there is no randomness, if there is 10 is too much.
On the second rank, 30 points are too low.
-Options: you can make some personalization on keys as a QoL. For now, that's what it could help.
-Remove the level up key in the UI and exchange it for a travel mode key, or if you plan to add some type of management mechanics, a management key. As the game continues to develop, a level up key it doesn't help in the UI, it is better to reserve it as a special key in the character page when the time is right. People will travel more than level up.
-Buy properties: let us buy properties as a way to earn more passive resources and money, this way, the resources can be used to upgrade equipment, places, cities, instead of use gold as every currency, for the castle.
-Mercenary/Knights system: mercenaries need beds, salaries, equipment, food. It is also unrealistic that now we have "soldiers" when we just started to see the world, and we are basically a newbie in every field, not realistic.
-Bestiary: You don't have a proper bestiary with images, weakness, loot, it could be a way to make more quests, and unlock new girls. Like, you need to defeat a particular creature a few times to unlock the complete page, get a bonus, special items, give food to your kids.
-Jail and pillory: Bandits and punishment, it is self-explanatory. Curious, because we have slave-traders.
-Skills: there should be passive skills that help the main character not only for the "Fight & Fuck" but to survive out there. You put us in a world with forests, mountains, bandits, reagents to take, but no basic skill to understand botany, survival, mining, hunt and flay, traps, etc. The same with the use of weapons, magic and more that involves combat.
That's enough, for now.
I'll do a more complete answer tomorrow, but basically...
1. The first point is essentially impossible, I can't rework all the storylines I currently have, and I also respectfully disagree, my friend.
I feel like all of our storylines/girls are unique, detailed and have very diverse interactions. The best I can do is think of bolder things for future storylines.
2. The issue of MC characterization missions: I agree. At that moment I thought about reorganizing the initial mission a little, adding micro-quests to it.
The second story mission should receive a secondary mission within it, with the MC better building his renown in the Skystone region before obtaining the castle.
I also want to expand on the first castle raid part, make it a little more exciting.
Bad news: This will more than likely require a new save if you want to see the new content. As I've said a few times, additions/modifications to older parts of the game can be problematic.
At this point, the side missions/extra content for the story missions will take up a lot of my time. Wish me luck...
1. The first point is essentially impossible, I can't rework all the storylines I currently have, and I also respectfully disagree, my friend.
I feel like all of our storylines/girls are unique, detailed and have very diverse interactions. The best I can do is think of bolder things for future storylines.
2. The issue of MC characterization missions: I agree. At that moment I thought about reorganizing the initial mission a little, adding micro-quests to it.
The second story mission should receive a secondary mission within it, with the MC better building his renown in the Skystone region before obtaining the castle.
I also want to expand on the first castle raid part, make it a little more exciting.
Bad news: This will more than likely require a new save if you want to see the new content. As I've said a few times, additions/modifications to older parts of the game can be problematic.
At this point, the side missions/extra content for the story missions will take up a lot of my time. Wish me luck...
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Airell Since you are happy for suggestions and I'm a huge sucker for status screens... I thought about while watching the detailed status screen for an NPC/party member (the one you came up for Eileen) there could be an option to switch between a front shot for each NPC/party member and a back shot by having a small arrow next to the picture to toggle?
Preggo bellies look good from the side too after all.
Preggo bellies look good from the side too after all.
Depend of the type of slave (being a main npc or secondary) it lead to diferent area to house them.
Main slave npc's: Upper slave bedrooms.
Secondary slave npc's: Bottom slave bedrooms.
Also you can check where they are hosted in character > characters > slaves; if you don't know where they go.
I used the slave system and no problem for me yet.
I agree with him. Some unique girls, in terms of their character and communication style, are too boring and lacking variety. After completing their personal quests and dragging them into bed, I was dismayed to discover that the main character is having sex and interacting with the same faceless doll, who only differs in name and picture. My complaint applies only to Astana and Priscilla, at the moment the romantic and intimate scenes begin.
Regarding the non-unique girls, there is also a lack of variety. If remove portraits, enemy names, and references to race characteristics (green skin, fur, ears), and try to guess who the main character is having sex with in these countless texts, it will be very difficult to determine, who is who, based on their character and talking style.
Actually, there are a bunch of things in this game that should've been fixed, but they're definitely won't be fixed. Take the main character, for example. He's basically a sappy asshole, "white knight", the kind you find in those mushy romance novels for women over 40. Watching his consistent behavior (and the same predictable response from the girls) after 10-15 encounters is becomes irksome and grating. You quietly start to hate him.
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thought bottom slave quarters where just extra rooms, I'll go grab those than thanks.
There are two quarters. The top (unique characters) and the bottom one (generic slaves).
Hmm, the problem is that it would cost twice as much in art, if I'm thinking you're suggesting what you're suggesting... xPAirell Since you are happy for suggestions and I'm a huge sucker for status screens... I thought about while watching the detailed status screen for an NPC/party member (the one you came up for Eileen) there could be an option to switch between a front shot for each NPC/party member and a back shot by having a small arrow next to the picture to toggle?
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Preggo bellies look good from the side too after all.
My answer - I respectfully disagree... This is a vanilla game, and the MC has a consistent personality and behavior. These things won't change, I won't add action/choices/branches customizations and other fetishes because it would make it impossible for me to complete the game that way, and I never set out to do that.
But that said, I don't understand what you suggest exactly... Give me a concrete example, please, something more clear instead of just telling me "that's bland, do something different" while I write by my hand each line of each character with tens of thousands of words per update and make them unique.
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If you really think that, okay, I can respect that. There's no point to discuss, when someone is not open to listen.
You are the developer, your game, your rules. But of course, later, don't say people didn't warn you.
I'll wait an aswer for the rest of things I said.
I wish you luck on the development.
I always am and thanks for your suggestions, man. The best I could get out of this was in terms of maps, MC development, and other things I need to check eventually... Right now, I'm modifying and adding a new story mission.
But about the girls, I just didn't have a clear example of what you mean. If it's just the girls' communication style, all I need is a clear suggestion.
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I think I was pretty clear on what is wrong with your girls but I will repeat it again:
-In the future, you should hire a writer, the relationships with the girls, are not good. They are plain, artificial, predictable, boring, and sometimes lacks of reality even on a fantasy game.
Calling every female on contact "Sweet thing" makes you hate him, because you say it to everyone, there is no realism in the relationships, it doesn't matter how grindy you make them, using the wait button to repeat the cycle, doesn't make them more valuable, the experiences you make with them in the history, yes.
Girls that are unique, are not tied with grind mechanics, they are tied with good and numerous experiences as quests that could be part of the history, and having kids, it doesn't feel as a good and important mechanic, but a fetish hole to fill.
I will add that, the more girls you add, the more problems you will have, and the less unique your girls will be, because there will be hundred of them. It will be a harem simulator instead.
Do you have a suggestion for what a good storyline/relationship is? Something that isn't plain, artificial and boring, as you say.
I've already changed the pronouns with some diversity. I had done this a few updates before, but Github apparently reverted those changes...
Given the fact that I already add unique missions and interactions for each unique girl, that each of their dialogue is unique... I assume you mean that they need more of that... I'm wrong?
Sorry, this is the strangest point... No other game has pregnancy as detailed as ours. Are you sure about this...?
This is a dilemma, according to what you say. Remember... We have a huge world to populate and explore. Without diverse storylines on the maps, we will have a gigantic and empty world, and you would be complaining about that instead. Having a good diversity girls/storylines is a problem, having few of them is a huge problem too.
And... Continuing my work. News... Syrin's new content is almost complete, with the exception of one or two tips... Dating and some special dialogues for her. Also, a player recommended interesting things about our MC development, and I liked his suggestions.
We will have more content for the MC in the initial missions, and with that we will have a new slave girl arriving soon... We're still going to decide on her, but I'm going to explore a race that we haven't touched on yet. Maybe... Leporyn... Needs to be an agile race, she is a bandit archer chief.
But anyway, a new story mission, modifications/additions to current missions, and deepening of the MC, and of course, more artworks... And Syrin's content, which is almost completely completed... On the list!
Syrin Content
Aaand, for the new story-missions stuff...
Hmm, yes... That's the womb for our Lupine girls. It is, as usual, an adaptation of the wolf womb's anatomy to the humanoid shape. Some of them have more discreet differences in relation to the Human womb, but others will be more... Different.
We will have more content for the MC in the initial missions, and with that we will have a new slave girl arriving soon... We're still going to decide on her, but I'm going to explore a race that we haven't touched on yet. Maybe... Leporyn... Needs to be an agile race, she is a bandit archer chief.
But anyway, a new story mission, modifications/additions to current missions, and deepening of the MC, and of course, more artworks... And Syrin's content, which is almost completely completed... On the list!
Syrin Content
- Love mission
- Missionary
- Blowjob
- 69
- Thighjob
- Lotus
- Doggystyle
- Morning doggystyle (Even more special... And hot. I love morning sex, blame me)
- Bath footjob and sweet spend time...
- Dating events (Ongoing...)
Aaand, for the new story-missions stuff...
- Expand First Call mission, 3 small tasks to help Usanna and her men before the invasion of the tribe.
- Add a story mission to unlock Skystone Forest. This includes slightly changing and expanding the events in the Rescuing Skystone quest.
- Expand Rescuing Skystone... Yes, naturally. It is in this series of missions that our MC will have the most construction.
Hmm, yes... That's the womb for our Lupine girls. It is, as usual, an adaptation of the wolf womb's anatomy to the humanoid shape. Some of them have more discreet differences in relation to the Human womb, but others will be more... Different.
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Imo POV scenes provide a maximum of "please let me be there" feeling and a challenge to get everything right when it comes to get the distances right due to only having the head as a main point and everything else must be put into submission nicely.
Surely not against POV scenes but plan them carefully or they might look terrible. =3
Oh and even different womb styles, depending on species? You are a trooper man.
Surely not against POV scenes but plan them carefully or they might look terrible. =3
Oh and even different womb styles, depending on species? You are a trooper man.