Love it. Definitely one of the best HTML games on this site (at least, as of 0.1).
The story isn't particularly complicated, but it is reasonably unique, and the writing is very good.
The only problem I have is that with some of the scenes with gender-bend characters, they are still referred to as if they are male. And that just kind of takes me out of it. I don't mind gender-bend, but reading "as your cock hits the back of his throat" is still a little too gay for me.
Maybe make a menu and put he/she pronouns as an option? Or just make the player choose for every character.
Anyway, it's not a big thing for now, but I'll probably begin to hate it more as the game gets into the later versions.