VN - Ren'Py - Abandoned - Love, Demons and Broken Nose [v0.2.1] [Lawfullame]

[v0.2.1] Relatively early stage, so not too much contents yet.

Not many choices (and, it seems, no relevant branching).

Good models and renderings.

Good writing (a few typos, though), nice story (silly, of course, as all supernatural stories, but in this framework well done).

Interesting and relatable LIs . MC and (at lest one of the) LIs seem in some sense mature and sensible, which is a very welcome change from most other games.

Enjoyable story so far, cute models, and an MC with some issues to work out beyond the typical good/ evil/ perv stereotypes.

For those complaining about the attitudes of one or the other girl... personally I find them a little more personable this way. I may not agree with their attitudes (on guns, violence, perving, prudishness, and so on), but again for me it's about following the story for now, and I feel we've only seen the tip of the iceberg there.

And I definitely see the personal horror they're dealing with. It may have been minimal screen time for now, but it's obvious there's long lasting psychological impact to deal with above and beyond the intriguing twist this puts on relationship building or the lack thereof.

Looking forward to much, much more on all fronts. Great work so far!

Enjoyed the game so far. Fun characters and interesting plot so far. CG is good, I really like the fact that Jane is sexually aggressive, that is rare in games that are not female domination. Looking forward to future updates.

I really tried to like this VN. The girls look nice, it's very refreshing to see some normal body shapes and not the 100.000.000 version of a model with huge rack, butt and a tiny waist.

But the weapon loving U.S.A. NRA propaganda bullshit is just too much for most people from Europe like myself.

The story itself was kinda refreshing for a "porn" game.

Good humour, good render (not giga titties girl), development is slow but worth checking up once in a while.
still looking forward for further update, the casual nudity is a plus, hopefully Dana will be more casual at v.0.3.

Review as of Ver. 2 Beta…


Off to a great start! The models look real, and approachable. Both qualities I appreciate over those bulbous-back-breaking-bazoongas often found in other visual novels. The writing is a little basic, not distractingly so, just guessing the author did better in art classes than English classes.
[edit: Just learned LawFullame, is not English native. Given that, they're doing fantastic with the writing!]
I don’t want to give out any plot spoilers, but I’m enjoying the story so far; there’re several plot points that have hooked me on this one already. The artwork is great, and the renders are pretty good. Nice balance between poly-count and file size.

The only real complaint I have is just a personal preference thing. While I absolutely adore red-heads, I was rather disappointed to see there was no bush on Dana. Cute red-head without even a little fire-bush is a bit of a let-down.

All in all, I’ll say “Love, Demons and Broken Nose” is one I’ll certainly be keeping my eye on. This one is definitely worth downloading for anyone who's interested.

*Edited, v0.2 Beta; notes above.

I appraeciate how the girls have a "girl next door" look instead of the usual heavily make-up big breasted dolls.

The horror part don't work at all, there is no tension.
The character are joking or speaking of sex or romance all the time. It's justified by saying that it's to forget about the situation but it's no convincing and the situation doesn't appears believable.
When the ghost/demon appears, the character are in despair, but nothing has ever happened, not in the past, not to their drunk friend (the perfect horror victim) and not when we see it, it just appear and disappear and over years, it didn't act hostile once.

The redhead girl is despictable : a crazy, violent, trigger-happy bitch that solve everything with violence.
The author seems to be into gun porn, he criticize "dumb triggered feminists" but all the characters are dumb NRA fanboys. This sound like alt-right shit.

This VN is way too american (in a bad way) for me.
I don't care if the author is not american, i'm speaking of the setting.

I like what I have seen of this game so far.
The characters are realistic, appearing more like the "girl next door" than some kind of styled beauties, having a more down to earth appeal that I will probably be able to keep empathizing with in later updates too. The surroundings have a similar feel of realism, being tidy but not polished.

The story is also engaging in a down to earth (although with a supernatural spice) kind of way, and if you just swallow those parts, has a realistic feel to it.

The sexy bits have so far been nice, but could have been slightly more developed, especially in the first flashback, which I think, either could have been slightly more drawn out, or perhaps had some edges smudged outside the focus individual (Not the one who is being fucked...or perhaps it is) to show where the focus of the memory is.

I voted 4 as I believe it will get even better, and I want to have room to up the vote when it does.

DL now, or wait an update or two? Up to you. I am happy I downloaded now.