Might be one of the few that isn't included? There is a difference between "many" and "all"
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I said it has many fetishes yes, that does not mean it has EVERY fetish.
I like what I see so far!
The biggest note/suggestion I have so far is that I'd prefer if the corruption process was more drawn-out. Simply put on the visor, zap, and they're done feels a little.. anticlimactic to me, I suppose? I understand that you probably want their original personalities to be preserved, but I do enjoy watching a girl's will to resist be broken over time, before they can be transformed fully.
The biggest note/suggestion I have so far is that I'd prefer if the corruption process was more drawn-out. Simply put on the visor, zap, and they're done feels a little.. anticlimactic to me, I suppose? I understand that you probably want their original personalities to be preserved, but I do enjoy watching a girl's will to resist be broken over time, before they can be transformed fully.
I agree, I also think the game developer should do this! Joking, thanks for the feedback! And yes, this is something I want to do too, the longer dragged out corruptions, but I also want to keep the aspect of the girls living like puppets and have normal personalities.
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I just finished it. I would like to give a few pointers.
1. since the main plot is revolving around the melodrama of the students and the rape and dolls are background stuff, make this clear in the description if you dont want a lot of disgruntled people shitting up the thread.
2. the sex scene felt like each position/sequence only has the last bit shown. this makes the sex look likie its a brief flashback. try showing the expressions changing and how the genitals interact.
3. my own nitpicks and requests: vanessa looks like she was manhandled for 3 days not 3 years. the damage should look more permanent. the blonde sisters are the stupid bunch and turner deserves to save his damsel, make it so.
otherwise the work was well done. I like the characters, though the dialogue can be less cheesy (I get that its showing the calm before the storm, but still).
1. since the main plot is revolving around the melodrama of the students and the rape and dolls are background stuff, make this clear in the description if you dont want a lot of disgruntled people shitting up the thread.
2. the sex scene felt like each position/sequence only has the last bit shown. this makes the sex look likie its a brief flashback. try showing the expressions changing and how the genitals interact.
3. my own nitpicks and requests: vanessa looks like she was manhandled for 3 days not 3 years. the damage should look more permanent. the blonde sisters are the stupid bunch and turner deserves to save his damsel, make it so.
otherwise the work was well done. I like the characters, though the dialogue can be less cheesy (I get that its showing the calm before the storm, but still).
1. F95 is mostly a place for drama, the comments on Itch compared to F95 is very very clear. That's why I don't really read about people arguing on here, I only care about feedback. The reason the description does not involve that is because it leaves a bit of questions before you play.
2. The sex scenes will be changed for the next update, it will be animations and more close ups of expressions, 0.01 is packed with content.
3. The whole Vanessa transformation might be redone, not decided yet fully. For 0.01, it's still early so it would be easy to do. Things are planned for Turner and the sisters in the future, this is a demo. The dialogue being cheesy is to give the characters a unique taste, and what you said about the calm before the storm is main part of that. More revealed in the next update.
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so i got 2 things besides saying i love the game and idea so far and will be following it.
1. besides ss i know patreon is not a place for this game is there gonna be any other way to support. since ss only takes credit cards they seem to forget there are ppl who cant get them.
2. the ending confused me a tiny bit the dolls did not know who each other were yet at the end vanessa did seem to remember her friend and sister. now it might be fixed in next update but i thought id bring it up.
1. besides ss i know patreon is not a place for this game is there gonna be any other way to support. since ss only takes credit cards they seem to forget there are ppl who cant get them.
2. the ending confused me a tiny bit the dolls did not know who each other were yet at the end vanessa did seem to remember her friend and sister. now it might be fixed in next update but i thought id bring it up.
1.For now, SS will be the main source of financial support. But, you just playing the game, giving feedback, following is support enough for me <3
2. And about the sisters, that will be redone, mainly cause it felt a bit rushed, so yes! It will be a bit different once 0.01 releases.
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ok well then i will just support in the way i can. i am looking forward to future updates. and will try to leave my feedbacks on each updates.
ty for the fast reply.
ok well then i will just support in the way i can. i am looking forward to future updates. and will try to leave my feedbacks on each updates.
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Aren't they improving the process? It seems like the earlier "models" could have retained their memories, only are unable to act on them.
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well what i meant was yes inside they still got their memories but the reprogramming into doll form so to speak made the sisters not recognise each other more then just love dolls. where love doll vanessa did seem to remember lyss
I don't know if anyone reads this thread right now as it's been some time since last update was released... But I can say, version 0.1 is very soon done! If you want direct sneak peaks and progress updates, please join the Discord server <3
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i do at least.ill get on joining discord tomorrow. cant wait to see how 0.1 turned out. i had 1 other question i saw short stories on ss will those eventually be public or stay for subscribers. gotta also give you props bringing out short stories and not get sidetracked on the main story.
That is actually a good question haha, I planned on doing only exclusive renders and every week make one free render.
But some of the renders on the SS is very high quality, so I would like people to see them. I'll discuss with the supporters in my Discord, and they can pick out 3 exclusive renders that will go public, haha.
Stage 1 of the 0.1 update is now done! Can send a brief stage reveal on how the release will go:
Stage 1: The First testers. (They find bugs, grammer mistakes, so on... First feedback source)
Stage 2: I will be Adding the audio, music, sounds...
Stage 3: I will play it with some testers to see the finale product.
Stage 4: The release of 0.1 starts... In this order:
First Master: 10 Days early.
Master: 7 Days early.
First Owner: 5 Days early.
Owner: 3 Days early.
Public release!
Stage 1: The First testers. (They find bugs, grammer mistakes, so on... First feedback source)
Stage 2: I will be Adding the audio, music, sounds...
Stage 3: I will play it with some testers to see the finale product.
Stage 4: The release of 0.1 starts... In this order:
First Master: 10 Days early.
Master: 7 Days early.
First Owner: 5 Days early.
Owner: 3 Days early.
Public release!
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well for me it mostly was about the julie short story am curious what happened to her. unless that will be part of the main game i said nothing then.
so if im correct that means 21st of oct we will get new release. nice cant wait
You actually get a new one the 14th, and the supporters has now voted on a render that will be made public out of the first 7.
So you will get 2 renders shortly.
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For those who don't know, 0.1 will release for the first tier supporters on the 21th! Might release on the 19th! Depends a bit...
It will be released for First Master & Master tier!
It will be released for First Master & Master tier!
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