Will adjust this rating when I finish the release. Great art! And the story so far is serviceable. But some things are off; like when Anna is riding Greg at the beginning... she looks to be about 1.25 times his size... bordering on "Giganticism Fetish"... which unfortunately I'm not in to. And the girls all seem to have a lot of... fur?... on them. I like that you're trying for detail, but scale that back a bit. And Chelsea looks borderline vampire, with her fangs trying to escape her lips. If she IS a vampire, great... but this doesn't seem the direction you're taking us.