Sadly not much good to say about this one...
Story-telling is awful, can be summarized in two sentences and even that isn't presented well in this VN so far.
Forward/backward in time, droplets of story here and there, interrupts with different characters out of nowhere, version-clippings left in the game, non-sensical "plot" like murdering someone and hiding from the police in a women's bathroom, where you meet a woman who also hides from the police. You both have to be silent but for some reason, you just start fucking and getting noisy just because... "Just because" and "whatever" seems to be the "plot"-driving "mechanisms" here in general.
It has some potential with SERIOUS rework.
English is bad, grammar awful, writing awful, often problems with genders (he/she...), partially Turkish sentences.
The renders are somewhat decent, animations are mediocre. The moving sequences at the beginning are the worst.
Often, characters who should have been visible before appear out of nowhere, worst case: the principal's office. You surprise two persons fighting there and after the fight, half the cast seems to be in this damn room for no damn reason.
Sorry, but that's it so far.
Story-telling is awful, can be summarized in two sentences and even that isn't presented well in this VN so far.
Forward/backward in time, droplets of story here and there, interrupts with different characters out of nowhere, version-clippings left in the game, non-sensical "plot" like murdering someone and hiding from the police in a women's bathroom, where you meet a woman who also hides from the police. You both have to be silent but for some reason, you just start fucking and getting noisy just because... "Just because" and "whatever" seems to be the "plot"-driving "mechanisms" here in general.
It has some potential with SERIOUS rework.
English is bad, grammar awful, writing awful, often problems with genders (he/she...), partially Turkish sentences.
The renders are somewhat decent, animations are mediocre. The moving sequences at the beginning are the worst.
Often, characters who should have been visible before appear out of nowhere, worst case: the principal's office. You surprise two persons fighting there and after the fight, half the cast seems to be in this damn room for no damn reason.
Sorry, but that's it so far.