Is the Dao of MTL profound with this one?
I skimmed and it actually looks fairly fine.
I even wonder if this is either GPT and just not labeled as such or well edited MTL because from what I skimmed over. I didn't notice any major flaws. Even the use of pronouns seemed okay at least half the time.
THere were a few points where I was like "wait ... that doesn't seem quite right" but it wasn't immersion breaking bad where I'm forced to focus on interpreting the translation instead of comfortably reading.
So unless I just missed all the really bad stuff. THis is actually perfectly acceptable.
THere were still a few parts like the MC saying "even though I'm pregnant" so ... still not perfect. but that's as far as the flaws went and they weren't constant.
at the very least it's not doing stuff like translating pregnant as "prenatal belly" or awkward stuff like that.