Ren'Py - Abandoned - Lovely Academy [v0.1.2] [CastleStudios]

Looks verry good ! Looking forward to it, the renders are pretty unique and the characteres design... just awesome, the story is pretty so far and do have a good future ! I hope the devs gonna be aware because the game do have a lot of potential.

Three stars!! Just for the render alone tho, everything else is a 0, not because is bad, but because there is nothing yet, odd too, cuz 3 plus gigs for little to no content at all. I guess all the resources went to all the girls' boobs or something

Lovely Academy is on of the best adult games and it really stands out with render quality and crazy good animations. I am looking forward to se how will it develop in the future, cus it has a lot of potential.

as if its now, its other more of the same genre, but why i give it 3 is because the excesive size of it, its only the 0.1.2 ver and already 4 gigs, that is not ok, i know there is an android version but still the priority should be the pc ver, specially the way of compression of the game so it can be available easier on the first steps of development that is right now

a game that I follow very closely, the girls are beautiful, the story is quite interesting and the renders are incredible too, in short, a very good game, I see a lot of future for it and I recommend it.

Great game, I look forward to new updates, the artwork is fantastic, the look of the characters magnificent and the story has a good future. It entertains you with puzzles when it comes to finding objects relevant to the story and has several decisions that lead to meet different characters or focus on the already known, which makes it even more interesting.

Well... many five star review here... dont know why though...

There is not much to the game qualified for 5 stars.

Story? Come on... there is nothing special... father dead, boy moves in with mother and family... yeah well, never heard before hm? And than some mysteries comes up including murder... and of course its up to the MC to solve this, uff... thats not a good story its dumb and very far fetched.

Sex? There is nothing... Dialogues? Well... nothing said in this game is in any case entertaining or important... there are even things that dont make any sense like for example "Emma makes a nice Dinner" well, there is no Emma in the game. And many other things like that... all the dialogues are pretty much pointless... the dev could pretty much make scene where the sun is shining and let the characters say "well the sun is shining" overall the dialogues have this kind of content.

Postive? The Renders, yep they are awesome... but the one and only good about the game, everything else is either not existent or bad. or annoying (like the sandbox, cause... just why?)

Its an early game so far, but i dont see much promising here besides the renders... but a visual novel, be it a porn game or not, cant just live only out of renders, there has to be something else... and this game has nothing else besides the renders... so no, its not a 5 star game, especially not compared to REALLY good games with actual content.

I mean... if you rate THIS 5 stars, what about the real good games out there? 50000 stars? 5 is the best rating possible, and this game isnt even close to that. its acutally in a poor state so far, cause there is nothing to experience so far... and how the dialogues are written and the poor and dumb story starts, there is just no way how this game will turn into something really good.

Pretty short (though it's version 0.1 so that's fine) but an interesting start so far. What probably stands out most is the great renders, and I like the character designs so far. I can appreciate the MC not looking super generic or like a goblin too. It also has music which is always nice. You can tell the game takes some inspiration from things (like the opening scene which is very Persona 5 vibes)

I like sandbox games, but I would hope a map gets added at some point as clicking around a bunch to figure out where to go can get very tedious. The dialogue sometimes reads a bit weird (at least in English), and in the same vein, I feel like the way some of the characters act in general just feels a bit off which is probably my biggest issue so far. Also I'm sure other people have pointed this out but the way some of the scenes don't progress automatically when it seems like they should is a bit annoying. A few times I would wait for the scene to continue not realizing it was waiting for me to click. It's a small issue all things considered but it gets old fast.

Overall though, I think the game has potential and that's part of why I'm giving it a higher rating. This appears to be the developers first game, so once those problems get ironed out and they find their flow I can see this game turning into something great. Excited to see where this goes!

I really like this game .

Gameplay : ✭✭✭✭✰
Story : ✭✭✭✭✰
Spelling : ✭✭✭✭✰
renders : ✭✭✭✭✰
Potential : ✭✭✭✭✭
Overall : ✭✭✭✭✰
Girls physique : ✭✭✭✭✰
Graphic : ✭✭✭✭✰
Creativity :✭✭✭✭✰

All the best to the developer .

Excellent renders and graphics. Good looking MC. MC is like the character who appears in anime and every girls in that anime simps for him. He is really good looking. Excellent game for Weebs and otakus. But this one seems like chinese. For the story part I can't say that much for now. Gameplay is short. A sandbox game but I didn't experienced any bugs. One thing I didn't understand is what's with motako is she really have some superpower or is it used for humor like in animes. But there is mystery tag in this game. But I really enjoyed playing this game.

+ Great renders and models
+ Good looking MC
+ Sandbox is not grindy

I did everything I could to do in terms of route and history in this version 0.1.1...

So the game has good graphics, but it has a problem, despite not owning the sandbox tag, it has sandbox elements and these elements are poorly deployed within the game, the movement options do not work right and lacked polishing and refining in this system within the game... The protagonist has a nice look and the story is still at the beginning, there is not much to say initially.

Below will be my grades for each category, where 10 is the top score:

Graphics: 9;
History: 9;
Plot: 8.5;
Characters: 8.5;

Verdict: It is possible that in the next update the problems with the sandbox elements are fixed, so I will follow.

(this text may have connotation errors, because I do not speak English fluently)

Pretty short game but its just the into/demo. Good so far. Love the girls designs, they all look great. MC also at least unique, girls too. Lots of games use the same models but at least here everyone is unique. As far as the games I have played anyway.

Story - N/A (so far) in game there isnt much but from the overview it seems promising, mystery is great but as the game just released more as a demo not much has happened yet. So no rating yet.

Renders - 5/5 The girls are gorgeous, MC looks good too.

Environment - 5/5 (so far) Not a lot available yet but the house, alley and the store with the wine all look good.

Music and sound - 5/5 I typically mute my games as I play and watch podcasts but if music is available or sounds I play with it to see how well it is, I was satisfied despite it being just a short demo. Im sure in the future it will be fine.

Gameplay - 4/5 I typically dont like sandbox point and click stuff. It really just serves as a time waster and causes bugs. Some elements are fine but as the game is rather short in the first release, I do not yet know how extensive this will be in the game. So far its fine but we will see.

Bugs - Right now its just that when you switch the language to english, some menue test stays in spanish. But the game dialogue you actually read is english and seems to be written well. Unlike many of the "engrish" games that get released.

So, a few random thoughts for v0.1 as I play:

• Going fullscreen on launch is not the way, my man.
• English needs to be default.
• Half the interface still in spanish, what gives?
• Leftover saves from testing? Broken too.
• Starting scene was interesting.
• I like the models (stepdad a bit plain though).
• Music too. Good.
• Default volume though. I'm sure there are heart attack victims out there. RenPy sound, always up to 11.
• I'm sure there was a lot of effort put into renders, but can't see anything from the eye cancer these compression artifacts are causing. It's so bad I get the feeling you were compressing for a faraway friend in rural China who's on dial-up and mistakenly posted it as the main release. Just go PNG, lossless, makes people appreciate your art, not stab their own eyes out on reflex.
• Why everyone and their mother insist on adding fake 'gameplay'? It serves only two purposes: annoy people and waste their time.
  You have a story to tell, so tell it, no need for me as a player to click through empty hallways, cordoned-off stairs and ghost-like subway stations. Please.
• Thoughts are not indicated as such in text in some places.
• A couple of 'image not found' errors.
• Does not go to the home screen at the end.
• Short.

Writing's a bit stiff, and I could not appreciate the renders, even though I like the models. Oh, and no way a random convenience store has a bottle of 1957-whatever.

Lots of negatives, but mostly technical or a matter of opinion. All fixable.
Carry on, improve, might make it a great game yet.