A stepnephew goes to stay with his stepaunt and along the way his stepsister comes by. It goes downhill from there....
Yes:
Different art style
Bold colors
No:
Stepaunt this, Stepaunt that, Stepaunt did this, etc...over and over each line....Stepaunt.... (occasionally her real name Ruby)
Then it starts in with Stepsister came by, stepsister did this, stepsister that....over and over.... It's so incredibly annoying.
Stepaunt basically looks like a large man that has female bits. Maybe not the face, but the rest...
Stepaunt looks almost younger than stepnephew and stepsister....
Again...w the Engrish...
" I didn't touch her. I got my senses up in time and went to my room"
Dumb writing....
Stepaunt: What are you reading anyway?
Stepnephew: Uh, it's just something I stumbled upon
Stepaunt: You picked up a book without knowing it's title?
Stepnephew: Ehm, yeah....sure, it's
Stepaunt: What's all this mumbling? Do you know the title of the book or not?
Stepnephew: ....Ugh, screw it, I'm going all in!
Stepnephew: I don't know the name of the book
.....................................and on and on..........................................
I'm sure there are going to be some stepneighbors and stepfriends in there.... Probably some stepstores and stepschools... Maybe a stepswimmingpool so you can see the stepgirls in stepbikinis.. I dunno, it was too bad to continue.
Yes:
Different art style
Bold colors
No:
Stepaunt this, Stepaunt that, Stepaunt did this, etc...over and over each line....Stepaunt.... (occasionally her real name Ruby)
Then it starts in with Stepsister came by, stepsister did this, stepsister that....over and over.... It's so incredibly annoying.
Stepaunt basically looks like a large man that has female bits. Maybe not the face, but the rest...
Stepaunt looks almost younger than stepnephew and stepsister....
Again...w the Engrish...
" I didn't touch her. I got my senses up in time and went to my room"
Dumb writing....
Stepaunt: What are you reading anyway?
Stepnephew: Uh, it's just something I stumbled upon
Stepaunt: You picked up a book without knowing it's title?
Stepnephew: Ehm, yeah....sure, it's
Stepaunt: What's all this mumbling? Do you know the title of the book or not?
Stepnephew: ....Ugh, screw it, I'm going all in!
Stepnephew: I don't know the name of the book
.....................................and on and on..........................................
I'm sure there are going to be some stepneighbors and stepfriends in there.... Probably some stepstores and stepschools... Maybe a stepswimmingpool so you can see the stepgirls in stepbikinis.. I dunno, it was too bad to continue.
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