VN - Ren'Py - Lovephobia [v0.30] [Kuviragames]

PROS
Its got pretty decent set-up. I didnt find myself bored and it has enough drama to draw your interest. Nothing over-the-top like supernatural shit or drug cartels like in other VNs, but the plot instead sticks to regular slice of life drama which is nice to see.

To be honest, this game feels pretty realistic compared to a lot of the other titles on this site. The girls have their own stories and it doesn't feel like their entire lives revolve around pleasing the MC. They have their own relationships and goals outside the sphere of the MC. This is very refreshing to see.

Its got a decent amount of lewd scenes for a game thats just starting.

CONS
There is a unavoidable main girl. Even if you select all the bad/negative options with her, you are still forced to be in a relationship with her. The game seems to be kinda centered around her so if you dont like her then your gonna be annoyed (I never seem to like the "main girl" cause they are always super plain or just some sort of super virgin childhood friend).

It improves later on, but there is a significant amount of basic grammatical errors and spelling mistakes in the beginning. Random words are capitalized when they shouldn't and he doesn't capitalize 'I' which should always be the case even if its mid sentence.

wow, a really promising start for the first game. The story is interesting and the dialogues are easy to read despite small spelling and grammatical errors. The consistently sex-driven behavior of some of the women in the game is less believable. Of course it's a harem/porn game, but some some scenes seemed a bit rushed or too early. 5 stars to push it

The first update was well done

• What truly stood out to me was the implementation of the netorare theme in this game. It strikes a perfect balance—allowing the player to fully enjoy the experience without being overwhelmed by negative emotions like depression. The reason behind this is simple: everything is within the player’s control. This approach makes the emotional engagement impactful yet manageable, creating a uniquely immersive experience
  
  
• One of the strongest aspects of the game is the originality of the character designs. This level of creativity is a rarity, as 99% of games fail to deliver on this front. The distinct and fresh appearance of the characters adds an extra layer of appeal, making the game feel both unique and memorable
  
  
• The characters are all attractive, with a mix of some being hot, some being beautiful, and others having a sweet charm
  
  
• The renders in the game are quite satisfying. While they may not be exceptional, they certainly meet expectations
  
  
• The writing in the game is truly enjoyable. I found myself thoroughly immersed in the dialogues
  
  
• The atmosphere is another strong point
  
  
• The music, while decent, could have been improved. Perhaps a softer, more romantic soundtrack could have enhanced the emotional depth of the scenes. Additionally, during the NTR moments, incorporating heartbeats along with a slightly darker, but not overwhelming, piece of music could elevate the tension and add another layer of immersion
  
  If there’s a potential weak point, it might be the appearance of the main character. While it’s fantastic that the design is original, his soft, pale skin combined with his physique gives off a vibe that feels slightly off—almost struggling to strike the balance between masculine and neutral(leans slightly towards a more feminine aesthetic). Don’t get me wrong; I’m not advocating for an overly “alpha” look, but perhaps a more balanced, average appearance would feel more fitting and relatable
  
  Overall, I would recommend it to others, as it offers a well-rounded, enjoyable experience
  Looking forward to more NTR scenes

Very enjoyable so far.

Renders are quite good.

The English could for sure use some proof reading though.

Story so far seems pretty standard slice of life but I like all of the girls so far. If you are the type of person like me who doesn't like overpowered MC's and NTR as a consequence of not being smooth enough to get the ladies on merit then you would probably enjoy this VN. This types of novels are usually all the more satisfying when you have to put in the work to get the girls.

For such an early game worth 5 stars author just needs to mostly correct the grammar.