VN - Ren'Py - Abandoned - Loves and Punches [v0.2.1] [Solid Coffee]

The QTE events alone are enough to deserve a rating of zero but there's other problems.

The whole game comes across as not respecting the player at all with loud shitty music from launch and i mean excessively loud then the mc condescendingly talking to the player breaking the 4th wall then immediately launching into a crappy sex scene with no payoff as the opening

The MC is an absolute dickhead, someone trying to act like a hardman written by somebody who's never even gotten close to a boxing ring or fight. The dialogue he has with women is atrocious.

The models and renders are excellent but not enough to make you consider trying to continue after the first qte event

Also you see the girls thoughts,, one of the two instant game ruiners (the other being dream sequences). The girls all desperately fall in love with mc in their thoughts. It has an insecure vibe I dont enjoy

MC is kind of a braindead, renders are ok, not good or bad just normal, some pretty LI, now what made me just drop this game and ignore it, 2 Li are in the trash bin already, one LI sexting with another dude and masturbating to the videos exchanged with that guy, another Li is showed fucking another douche dude, this game is missing the 3 letter tag be warned. All in all dev didn't learn with the mistakes of his previous abandoned game and is making the same ones in this one , so I don't see a long or bright future for this game too.
Waste of time playing this game be warned.

Its early, so hopefully about to change.
The girls look ok, thats it.

The MC is disgusting, behaves braindead and looks really creepy with this unnatural grin.

All sex scenes so far with random sluts are forced, no decisions whatsoever.
Typical foster mother who kisses the "dad" jealousy trope...
Some of them already flirt and send nudes to other guys, so NTR probably in sight.

The story is mind numbingly bad. Almost nothing makes sense.

Waste of time, but maybe the dev finds his common sense and restarts.

This is a really good game, I enjoyed, I think it's a really entertaining plot which has a lot of potential which it can take advantage of and Sophia is the cutest character there is, I look forward to next updates to know how it continues

The Pros

- It was a short release


The Cons:

- The spamming AI voice
- The Writing
- The horrible grammar and dialogue
- The MC
- The Story in general


Basically the MC just fights for the hell of it. Sometimes it without proper cause. It's weird to me. His facial expressions also makes him look like a creep. This may warrant another playthrough for some if the dev gets a translator and editor. But then again, maybe not. Main characters are a huge deal for me and the dialogue throughout the story killed the experience for me. Also I had to play on mute because of the annoying ai constantly spamming throughout the release. Don't Know if the guy is trying to avoid copyrights but if that's the case there's plenty of copyright free songs out there.

Godspeed man.