VN - Unity - Lucky Phone [v0.1.4] [Naughty Married]

Wow!!! Super, very sexy!! I like animations, Whant them more! Very cute girl, fast temp, as i like. No bugs. Good language. Hope there will be more kinki staff. Good story, and persons. Is there more games like that?

What an incredible game, and my native language is Portuguese, I loved your work. The only thing I would change would be that the video animations are slower and could be more fluid. But I understand it's so we can stop enjoying the view haha. Looking forward to updates!

The overall score for this game is kinda crazy to me. I stopped playing after episode 4 or 5 and just couldn’t bring myself to finish it. I recently played another phone-based game that was way better than this one

Writing 1/5
This is the game’s biggest flaw. I read some of the reviews, and now I can’t unsee one guy’s comment in his review about how it feels like it was written by some Indian guy. it makes perfect sense. The dialogue is extremely unnatural and weird. Humans don’t communicate like that. Honestly, even an AI could do a better job simulating real conversations, and it’d at least be grammatically correct.

Graphics 2/5
Low-res, often blurry AI-generated images that anyone could make. I guess the effort went into making sure the hands weren’t distorted, but the rest looks like images I was generating at first when I was just experimenting with Stable Diffusion a year ago.

Technical 3/5
It’s fine. There are no bugs, but the systems are so simple that I’d be surprised if there were any. I lowered the score because some things, like the wallpaper, are pretty useless. You never leave the texting screen anyway, so it feels like the design wasn’t well thought out.

Overall 2/5
English isn’t my first language and I thought I had a pretty good tolerance for bad English in games, but this game showed me just how bad writing can get. Even if you turned off 90% of your brain, it’s hard to believe two people are actually communicating in these dialogues. I can’t fathom how someone could say, " I've read every single dialogue in it and it was truly thrilling." Were they playing a different game, or in another language where the script isn’t just a direct translation but a completely different one?

The level of English kills this game, it sounds so much like an Indian guy has written it, I started hearing every text in an Indian accent

Nothing feels natural or real here, not the writing, not the way people talk to each other, especially not the art, which is just badly made, low resolution AI

Also, if you expect a NTR game like the other phone games, look somewhere else. From the start, the MC is pushing his girlfriend to look more slutty and get attention from men. Everything he says feels like autism

It gets 1 star for clean UI and good presentation, but otherwise its very hard to get into this game

Reviewed in version 0.1.4
Game is very promising, but it needs to be playable with the keyboard, I mean it's very simple game, why do I have to use the mouth and my dick at the same time? doesn't make sense for a porn game.
And if what I sensed is true, and there is various paths in the game, then we need either the ability to reply episodes, or we need a scene guide within the game to know exactly what we might have missed.
I hate Unity games they are always bad controls, but I can't imagine that the entire thing is unfixable.

-English is abysmal.
-Conversations make no sense.
-Ai photos basically means all the females and proportions look the same.
-There isn't any point in options when everything else is that terribly made.

the only decent parts are the clean ui and some qol settings.

My respect to the couple, this is a true romantic and sweet NTR/NTS game
I've read every single dialogue in it and it was truly thrilling
Thank you for such a master piece work
Hope to see more in future, and wish you good luck in the game and relationship

v0.1.3

So far I like the concepts being used, and the AI visuals look surprisingly good! The problem is that this game desperately needs a native English speaker to proofread the writer’s material. If the dialogue could be polished up a bit and flow more naturally, this would be a really good game despite it still being early in development.

TLDR: Good start but needs an English proofreader. Too early in development for me to rate it any higher than 3 stars but there’s good potential here for another fun NTS/swinging phone game.

I love NTR, and fans of SW/cuck should enjoy this creation.
The live streams and videos are technically well executed.
A lot of effort has been put into the app itself. The sounds, animations, transitions, etc.—I like everything about it. The wife doesn’t leave you indifferent, and the wife's friend with her ideas even more so.
I’m looking forward to an awesome continuation.

This is one of most intresting and good made games of this year! Pictures are very sexy. And the story is the best! Interesting dialogs an characters. Slow corruprion of main characters very good to wotch. A really want to see complete game!

Great potential, great start. Love the way it’s building up. Sometimes I had the feeling that the answers were almost identical, so not really sure if they’re really making an impact on how the story progresses. If so, my advice would be to separate them a bit more. Specially the emojis meaning is kind of confusing. Anyway, I’ll say it again: love the way it’s going. Keep up the good work.

Early review based on V 0.1.2.

Excellent, promising start.
Though my personal favorite so far, easily top 3 of games/stories using this phone/text concept that I've come across, and I've played more than a few of these "phone" stories.

Things that could be improved:
- The status/gallery doesn't "save" or stay unlocked when starting a new game. Subsequent playthroughs are hard resets. Not a big deal early on, but 100% photos, videos are based on choices, and if full 100% unlock ability diverges onto different paths, the hard status/gallery reset and lack of being able to unlock 100% is going to drive people, like myself, with completionism OCD absolutely crazy...lol I'm currently at 96% photos and it's driving me crazy that I can't find the 1 or 2 I'm missing...

- It's been noted that English is not the dev/writer's primary language. This is obvious in phrasing, wording in the text/story. Wording, phrasing improvements after translations would make this one even better going forward. The lack of quality conversion to conversation English is ok short term, but the lack of quality consistency over a longer period could diminish this product's excellent start and concept.

A very promising game. In its essence, it strongly resembles Netorase Phone, but with a greater bias towards spying on your wife with the help of her friend. I think the idea is very interesting and promising, success and good luck to the author, don't drop the idea, be sure to continue making content and everything will work out!

The game has potential, but it’s not without its flaws.
The FMC is attractive, and her personality good as a strong point.
However, the personality of the MC could use more development, as it feels underwhelming in comparison. As for the rest of the characters, their personalities fall into the middle ground—neither particularly strong nor weak, which leaves them feeling somewhat forgettable.

When it comes to the erotic scenes, there is a noticeable difference in quality. Some scenes are hot and engaging, while others fall flat, lacking the same intensity or appeal. This inconsistency affects the overall immersion, as the player is left unsure of what to expect.
The writing itself is another area where the game struggles. There are clear gaps in logic, such as a wife engaging in a provocative act one night, only to completely ignore it the next day. No discussions, no exploration of the situation with her husband—just a strange disconnect that weakens the narrative. The absence of meaningful dialogue in these situations detracts from the emotional weight of the story, leaving it feeling shallow and unconvincing

Probably the second best of these phone games I've played, the first update is pretty solid.
My one issue is sometimes of the phrasing of things and grammar is odd, which I'm guessing is due to the the creator not being an native english speaker
Other than that it's all pretty solid.

The ai generated Livestreams and videos are pretty nice.

While the general pacing of the game is pretty decent, the dialogue and art is rough.

The (AI) art is generally passable, but all the images seem a little out of focus and faces are uncanny. Additionally, the dialogue desperately needs an editorial once over. Each character speaks as though English is their second language. Its definitely understandable, a step up from mtl, but it still needs a touch up.

That being said, I do love the 'whole game takes place in a phone/computer' gimmick, so I hope it improves throughout its development which its very early in at the time of this review.

I don't know why this has so many 5 star ratings but it really doesn't deserve them. Absolutely no sex scenes, and HORRIBLE translations. The dialogue is robotic and stiff. The friend is so awkward and lacks any chemistry.

ABSOLUTE CINEMA!

The game has a almost perfect pace. The friend is a bit too rush on the hotwife thing, but not a big deal. The wife is gourgeous and super cute. A bit naivi, what is great! The AI generated images are hot tho!!!

The only problem was... that it was too short!!! Gimme more, hurry!!!

5/5 game! Looking forward! <3

really enjoyer this game so far, it plays smothly and the art is really nice, i like the way the "live streams" are done and the menu and everythings looks clean, so i will be waiting for more of this.