VN Unity Lucky Phone [v0.1.5] [Naughty Married]

[yenidena]

I figured out I love these kind of games, great work. However, English seems to be little broken, what's dev's mother tongue?

 

[Hotcoupleeasy]

Is there a way to change the option?

 

[_ripndip_]

NaughtyMarried based on ending, can we expect something spicy in next update?

 

[redoubt27]

It can turn out to be a good game if the elementary logical, well-founded connection “choice and the result of choice” works. Now logic is dead and already stinks.
The choice “This is our personal business with her.” – the result is exactly the opposite. The choice “No, and it was not worth doing!” – the result is exactly the opposite. The chain of choices in the last update: “You shouldn’t drink anymore.” “Are you definitely still sober?” “Maybe it’s time to call it a night?” shows that the MC doesn’t like the situation, he doesn’t like the guy, he doesn’t like his wife’s actions. Suddenly, completely unfounded, the opposite step “I’m not mad at you!” Can I take a look at it?”, logic is completely absent, the result is directly opposite to the choice. Why does the MC want to watch his wife kiss a guy the MC doesn’t like? Like a control shot to the head “It was magnificent!”, WHY? theater of the absurd.
False choices create a negative impression of the game, turning it into a meaningless farce without choice. If you fix the situation, logically connect the choice and the result of the choice, you can get a good game.

You do have a choice.
Don't play...

I think some of the "choices" are miscommunicated due to translation issues, and the rest are the reader misinterpreting what's actually going to happen...
The wife is going to cuckold the MC/reader, whether he wants it or not.
As the reader, you have the "choice" to be happy and supportive or unhappy about it...
If you don't want that at all, the only "choice" is to not play the game...

Seriously, given the content so far, this game is over if you/the reader says no I don't want this and the wife agrees...GAME OVER, done, no point in playing... If you/the reader doesn't want this to happen at all, and you keep playing, it's still going to happen, you're just going to be really pissed about it and complain in the comments section...

I do agree with you though. The choices should make more sense and fit the story better. The choices are giving the illusion that the reader has "control" over what's going to happen, but the only "control" you have as the reader is how you're going to feel about what's going to happen...

 

[redoubt27]

Yes, the choice has a strange effect on the plot and the dev should have indicated that this is a cuckold game, because i don’t see any other options, yet..!
But interesting phone mechanics.

Wouldn't that be the netorare tag?
From the dictionary: "Netorare is a genre of anime, manga, or video game focused on infidelity." With that tag, think it's safe to presume cuckolding is going to happen, in some form or another...

I think the issues with translation are creating some of the miscommunication.
The other issues are readers thinking this is or should go the way they expect...

 

[ItsNotUs]

Wouldn't that be the netorare tag?
From the dictionary: "Netorare is a genre of anime, manga, or video game focused on infidelity." With that tag, think it's safe to presume cuckolding is going to happen, in some form or another...

I think the issues with translation are creating some of the miscommunication.
The other issues are readers thinking this is or should go the way they expect...

I’m saying that the dev should make an emphasis and point out that this is a Cuckold game! Then there won’t be any questions.
But my opinion is that - the cuck genre is the most boring and uninteresting genre of the NTR!

 

[redoubt27]

I’m saying that the dev should make an emphasis and point out that this is a Cuckold game! Then there won’t be any questions.
But my opinion is that - the cuck genre is the most boring and uninteresting genre of the NTR!

From the overview...
"It explores fetishes such as hotwifing, netorare, and cuckolding."

Maybe the dev should put cuckolding in bold?

 

[Sveta532]

I’m saying that the dev should make an emphasis and point out that this is a Cuckold game! Then there won’t be any questions.
But my opinion is that - the cuck genre is the most boring and uninteresting genre of the NTR!

Mon ami, genres aren't the issue — it's the storytelling that matters. And trust me, this game's got plenty more tricks up its sleeve.

 

[redoubt27]

Mon ami, genres aren't the issue — it's the storytelling that matters. And trust me, this game's got plenty more tricks up its sleeve.

I can't say for sure why... but I'm going to trust you on this one...
This story is pretty good so far, and it's just getting started.

 

[ItsNotUs]

Mon ami, genres aren't the issue — it's the storytelling that matters. And trust me, this game's got plenty more tricks up its sleeve.

Let's see what happens next, while i see that the choice affects "some events".

 

[ItsNotUs]

From the overview...
"It explores fetishes such as hotwifing, netorare, and cuckolding."

Maybe the dev should put cuckolding in bold?

And cuckolding, that is, from this description i understand that the player has three paths to develop hot events:
1.Hotwife
2.Netorare
3.Cuckolding
and mb some kind of vanilla path of fidelity.

 

[Sveta532]

Let's see what happens next, while i see that the choice affects "some events".

It’s all about what you prefer in terms of the twists and turns of a woman's character.
Sur ce, portez-vous bien !

 

[Pr0GamerJohnny]

And cuckolding, that is, from this description i understand that the player has three paths to develop hot events:
1.Hotwife
2.Netorare
3.Cuckolding
and mb some kind of vanilla path of fidelity.

From the current gameplay, I'd imagine the vast majority of content will be of a hotwifing flavor... I cant really imagine a significant amount of vanilla or netorare gameplay coming out of this.



WHICH IS AWESOME!

 

[ItsNotUs]

It’s all about what you prefer in terms of the twists and turns of a woman's character.
Sur ce, portez-vous bien !

I like variety, but if this is a cuckold game, i just stop playing it like the game A wife life in which at first everything was in its place, but after certain events it became not "interesting".

 

[Sveta532]

I like variety, but if this is a cuckold game, i just stop playing it like the game A wife life in which at first everything was in its place, but after certain events it became not "interesting".

Honestly, why stress about it? Once they roll out enough updates, we'll see how it goes.

 

[redoubt27]

I like variety, but if this is a cuckold game, i just stop playing it like the game A wife life in which at first everything was in its place, but after certain events it became not "interesting".

It's a cuckold game...
You should stop playing...

Hotwife = consent to being a cuckold
Cuckolding = cuckold
Netorare = infidelity (all encompassing where the wife is having sex with someone other than the husband, which = cuckold).

If there was a faithful/fidelity route in this game, there'd be little to no point in making it...
It'd just be a game of getting messages from your faithful wife while she's on vacation with her slutty friend...

 

[Pr0GamerJohnny]

It's a cuckold game...
You should stop playing...

Hotwife = consent to being a cuckold
Cuckolding = cuckold
Netorare = infidelity (all encompassing where the wife is having sex with someone other than the husband, which = cuckold).

If there was a faithful/fidelity route in this game, there'd be little to no point in making it...
It'd just be a game of getting messages from your faithful wife while she's on vacation with her slutty friend...

you misunderstand him - I'm 90% sure he's a hard ntr fan putting down the other genres. This type of messaging tone is extremely common with them, pretty sure hard ntr fans use the word cuckold derisively even more often than harem fans.

Anyways this last update was awesome, i got to where she was kissing the guy in the bar but then it abrubtly ended so hopefully itll continue soon.

 

[redoubt27]

you misunderstand him - I'm 90% sure he's a hard ntr fan putting down the other genres. This type of messaging tone is extremely common with them, pretty sure hard ntr fans use the word cuckold derisively even more often than harem fans.

Anyways this last update was awesome, i got to where she was kissing the guy in the bar but then it abrubtly ended so hopefully itll continue soon.

Hard NTR = cheating, right?
Well, that's cuckolding, too...

Paraphrasing Pure Country: funny thing about that little white speck on top of chicken shit. That little white speck is chicken shit, too...

 

[ItsNotUs]

I don’t "understand" yours comments, i’m not writing that this is a bad game or something like that, i’m not a fan of hard ntr, i can say that in this genre ntr i like the construction of the plot while the characters fight, it’s interesting. I like cheating in games when they are done well and correctly, mystery NTR. I love when a game gives you the choice to play differently!

I don’t understand why many people think that if i write, that i’m a fan of something, i like different things, but i can say with all confidence that cuckoldry, which is when the mc gets pleasure from the fact that his girlfriends or wife are fucked by others, is not for me!

 

[ItsNotUs]

Hard NTR = cheating, right?
Well, that's cuckolding, too...

Paraphrasing Pure Country: funny thing about that little white speck on top of chicken shit. That little white speck is chicken shit, too...

Since the Middle Ages, cuckolds have been a contemptuous name for cuckolded husbands who are unaware that they are raising children from other men. The offensive word was invented in England by changing the name of a bird - the cuckoo, which is known for its manner of throwing eggs into other "people's"(birds) nests.

In our era, an ancient insult has acquired a new meaning. Cuckolding is when you get sexual pleasure from cheating on your regular partner. A cuckold man gets excited watching his woman - sex wife making love(fuck) to another.