Although the game is still getting worked on. I'm going to give it my best shot to review it in it's current form.
The first thing you'll notice when starting this game is that it's absolutely beautiful.
From character models to backgrounds the game is stunning to look at, couple this with a good usage of short animations during normal scenes
and it turns into great eye candy. The artist who worked on this definitely knew how to create a beautiful game.
If art alone made a great game though many other games on this website would not be able compete and I would rate this game 5 Stars.
Sadly this is not the case or rather luckily this is not the case, because when creating a game in the style of a visual novel one must not forget that the visual part is not alone in creating a memorable and high standing game.
This leads to the reason why I am currently only giving this game 3 stars,
Because although the art is beautiful the same cannot be said for the writing.
Plot wise the story is okay not particularly original, it's harry potter but for adults some names were changed and some hot looking characters were thrown in. Not bad not good just okay.
But the writing oh god the writing it's not the worst I have seen but it's pretty mediocre none the less, made even worse because of the look of the game just brings the writing in sharp contrast.
The dialogues are awful they feel stilted, robotic, empty, they lack any form of wit or character and come over as if the writer has never written a decent dialogue between people before.
Or that the writer is not a native English speaker and is therefore not wise to the nuances of native speech and dialogue. This is reinforced by the fact that many sentences feel wrong, there are some grammatical errors and the construction of the sentences feels iffy. It's the same for any written part in the game,It's not that it's confusingly written that's not the problem you can follow the story, it's just so boring to read and it feels like it was made out of plastic.
Our MC is also not the best, he's not very charming although the story acts like he is nor does he stand out in any way that makes him very likeable or interesting, same for the girls right now they feel like they don't have a single personalty amongst them.
This also hampers what few sex scenes we get. I mean they look good enough but any time someone opens there mouths it gets ruined.
Gameplay wise the game is a typical visual novel. Right now we don't get enough of a feeling on whether our choices have any impact on the story so it's more of a kinetic novel, but it's too early to tell. This will probably change during development.
So to sum up if the only thing you are looking for is some pretty pictures with a mediocre story to tie them together and you don't like reading then I would recommend this. If writing and dialogue are things you enjoy move along there are a dozen better written games some of witch can offer similar quality of renders but are at least fun to read and play.
Still this game is early in it's development giving the creators ample time to really make it great, Because even a mediocre story can become incredible in the hands of a good writer. And I hope that by investing in the writing I can come back and give this game a 5 star rating. But right now it's a 3.
The first thing you'll notice when starting this game is that it's absolutely beautiful.
From character models to backgrounds the game is stunning to look at, couple this with a good usage of short animations during normal scenes
and it turns into great eye candy. The artist who worked on this definitely knew how to create a beautiful game.
If art alone made a great game though many other games on this website would not be able compete and I would rate this game 5 Stars.
Sadly this is not the case or rather luckily this is not the case, because when creating a game in the style of a visual novel one must not forget that the visual part is not alone in creating a memorable and high standing game.
This leads to the reason why I am currently only giving this game 3 stars,
Because although the art is beautiful the same cannot be said for the writing.
Plot wise the story is okay not particularly original, it's harry potter but for adults some names were changed and some hot looking characters were thrown in. Not bad not good just okay.
But the writing oh god the writing it's not the worst I have seen but it's pretty mediocre none the less, made even worse because of the look of the game just brings the writing in sharp contrast.
The dialogues are awful they feel stilted, robotic, empty, they lack any form of wit or character and come over as if the writer has never written a decent dialogue between people before.
Or that the writer is not a native English speaker and is therefore not wise to the nuances of native speech and dialogue. This is reinforced by the fact that many sentences feel wrong, there are some grammatical errors and the construction of the sentences feels iffy. It's the same for any written part in the game,It's not that it's confusingly written that's not the problem you can follow the story, it's just so boring to read and it feels like it was made out of plastic.
Our MC is also not the best, he's not very charming although the story acts like he is nor does he stand out in any way that makes him very likeable or interesting, same for the girls right now they feel like they don't have a single personalty amongst them.
This also hampers what few sex scenes we get. I mean they look good enough but any time someone opens there mouths it gets ruined.
Gameplay wise the game is a typical visual novel. Right now we don't get enough of a feeling on whether our choices have any impact on the story so it's more of a kinetic novel, but it's too early to tell. This will probably change during development.
So to sum up if the only thing you are looking for is some pretty pictures with a mediocre story to tie them together and you don't like reading then I would recommend this. If writing and dialogue are things you enjoy move along there are a dozen better written games some of witch can offer similar quality of renders but are at least fun to read and play.
Still this game is early in it's development giving the creators ample time to really make it great, Because even a mediocre story can become incredible in the hands of a good writer. And I hope that by investing in the writing I can come back and give this game a 5 star rating. But right now it's a 3.