Not a bad start, really. Great models and assets. Decent story. English translation(?) could use a scrubbing or possibly just proofing.
But overall like I said, not a bad start.
Good work so far RedLolly! I look forward to the next update and a possible Patreon sub.
But overall like I said, not a bad start.
Good work so far RedLolly! I look forward to the next update and a possible Patreon sub.