VN - Ren'Py - Lust Town, Amanda’s road to porn [v0.3] [NOSY GULL]

Version 0.3. At this time its a 2 star. BUT to be clear huge potential.

But right now, no. Its coding is horrible, sound effects drive you crazy. Rain pattering like on a tin roof outhouse and it goes on and on, and on, and on. Some other sounds like a creaky floor or rocking chair constantly going...just remove those dev, they are horrible.

Transitions are very poorly done, hit the space bar and it goes to the next text sentence, next time it skips it, pauses between words. Ridiculous more background sound effects that you HAVE to turn the sound off or go insane.

Which is unfortunate as there are some really good sound effects during sex, moans and such. Pretty good stuff if you were not driven insane by the background noise.

The art is different, but I really like it, she is a mature lady and its a rough, almost noir throw back art kinda thing. I found it very refreshing and well done. Sin city type backgrounds and scenes feel to it.

Animations are there, but they are playing on a loop that you cannot skip once its done, in one the space bar had you fucking, then the next it just plays with no way to stop it if you are wanting to move on.

I will happily come back for every release and update my review - it does have really great potential. If the dev cleans up the code, sounds, and transitions. I hope the dev keeps at it, and spends some time fixing things first.

I'm not sure how this game is rated so highly. The artwork is very bad, the messages seems slow and clunky and within one night the wife is full on cheating on her husband in every way you can imagine, There's no build up.

This game is a kinetic battle with the UI, menu, save or load,
moving forward trough transitions, ESC key will close the game and so on.

The concept is cool and the art is too,
but the code execution is a rock under rock bottom.

The build up is ok, short but can be further expanded,
and the pacing is done cinematic style as to appear that the game is longer than 20min.

Every transition and line of text is in slow motion that will make your head
spin from too much cinema on the screen.

The content is srong but very little a scene here and there,
and it's called a demo, even the second one.

It has potential, If someone works at it it can be a big hit,
but the fact that it was released like this,
says everything I need to know about its development.

Really good game so far (tested RPGM demo2 version) - whatever issues I had with the engine slowness is now irrelevant with the move to Renpy.

Graphics: loved the style, unusual, looks to me a bit like the old French comics (BD) from the 1980s, 1990s. The sex scenes in the motel were super hot (well a bit too slow but as mentioned above, just the engine). Very nice altogether.
Writing: good - from the usual 'desperate bored housewife', it moves into something unusual and the pace is good - characters are well built and have some depth already. A few mistakes due to not being native speaker but really very few and not game braking in any way.
Can't wait to see more! Well done Nosy Gull!

Just one thing that bothered me a bit: the eyes of the characters- i'd love to see more expression in them (minor complaint though).

Atmosphere: Excellent
Art: satisfactory
Personality MC: Very excellent
Story: Original and attractive
Background sounds: excellent
Writing: Excellent
MC's appearance: excellent body, but the face is between average and excellent
Programming language: I wish it was Renpai, but it doesn't bother me at all

Overall, the game is very good and has a lot of potential
Maybe I will change the score in the future, but for now, I won't give it less than 5 because of its high potential

I really like the art and the concept. It's paced well, but the engine is appalling. If you press "ESC" (to go to the menu) it closes the game. Saves don't work, the dialogue progresses really slowly and there is no way to skip it or the splash pages at the start.

This would be 5* if the engine wasn't so dire that it makes playing the game virtually impossible.

Edit: I see in the discussion that the developer is moving to Renpy for the next update. Hopefully that will fix the issues.

Sexy mom protagonist, unusual plot that allows her to do a lot of sexy things, I recommend it.
What I liked was the unusual comics plot, allowing the characters to go further and further into sexual stories, which I think will have many types of characters.
All tastes, from young to old, ugly or pumped up.
The sex scene that is in the game is staged well, and it is long, with fun and exciting dialog.
From the disadvantages that I noted at this stage, even without looking at them
1) The engine of the game, the inability to skip faster dialog, because quickly read, had to sit for another 10 seconds, and wait for a continuation
2) The art is a bit uneven, sometimes the protagonist's face doesn't look like herself

From the wishes
I would like to see more foreplay in the sex scenes, especially about breasts, having such huge breasts, it should be paid attention to her

I love this game demo so far. The art style is unique. The story is plausible and fun. I think the pacing is just right to introduce the story and for the big sex scene in the demo. A few bugs here and there, but not enough to prevent a play through. Looking forward to the next updates!

Amazing game, cant wait to see whats next! The system is nice, interesting and new, the drawing are beautiful and the character interesting. Hope we will be able to do choices and dicover more about this lust town !