This is for v0.1 of the game. In other words, the very beginning.
On the positive side, the MC appears to actually have some personality, and that's a big plus in my book. He's not timid and he's not a pushover. This already makes him better than the vast majority of MCs, IMO.
Also, the girls are reasonably cute and the game doesn't waste much time before showing some naughty bits and deviant situations.
Of course, there wasn't a lot to show, so plotwise there isn't much to it.
Now the bad part: the translation is really, *really* bad. Like a machine translation from a lobotomized machine. For now, I guess it's vaguely tolerable, but at some point in the near future, it's going to have to be fixed, otherwise people are going to drop the game solely because of how much a chore it is to make sense of the text.
Overall, I've decided to give it an average score, but if this game were further along, I would've given it fewer stars, and if I come back to this game in the future and the translation hasn't improved, I *will* be giving it fewer stars.
Anyway, I hope the dev keeps with it and upgrades whatever he is using to translate this into English, because it does have potential to be a good game.
Edit: After having gone through the latest version of the game, the English translation is... better. It's still far from good, but it no longer requires a degree in translating obscure texts to understand it. It's still not all that long, so the score I've given it is tentative. And, if possible, I would've given it a 3.5 instead of a 4, but... well, the girls are slutty and twisted enough that I decided to round upwards.
I hope the Dev is able to keep this up going forward.