VN - Ren'Py - Lustful Whispers [0.1 - Public] [NHQHAI]

Strengths :
- Wife is hot
- Renderings are acceptable -- 7 out of 10
- Animations are acceptable -- 7 out of 10
- The atmosphere of the game is dark and serious, this is
necessary for NTR
- The writing is almost great-- 9 out of 10

But
Important question: When are NTR and NTS genres enjoyable? When we fall in love with fmc, but who falls in love with an fmc who participates in a porn movie for a stupid reason in the first year of marriage without corruption !!? This is not a good way to implement ntr at all

Weak points:
- So the personality fmc is very bad
- Before the start of ntr, we need events or backstories that will make us fall in love with fmc, but I haven't seen anything like this
- Fmc should be a hard girl instead of a slut, the majority of players, including me, do not like sluts and easy girls
- fmc should not be the antagonist of the story, in the process of corruption, fmc always has sex with someone other than mc against her heart's desire, when approaching the end of corruption, the absence of this condition is not a problem, so NTR should use methods such as economic crisis, socially crisis, vital help to son or husband, blackmail, corruption, drug and other methods that are against the will of FMC, because I personally hate FMCs who betray very quickly without a Big Logical Reason
- The logic of the game should be high, fmc should not sleep with other men for very childish reasons, mc should not cause ntr for stupid reasons, low logic in the game causes lack of empathy with the characters of that game
- For the atmosphere of this game, there is a need for choices, choices that end in the paths of nts and ntr (or soft ntr and hard ntr)

In the future, if the implementation method of NTR is changed or if a backstory of the reason for betrayal is shown that fully justifies it, I will change my rating to 5 because it deserves it.

Not good. I feel that as a NTR game, you would want to let the players feel immersed with the story with being able to interact with choices that are somewhat meaningful to the route you are taking in the story. To give NTR games meaning you have to build a character(s) just enough for the players to emotionally be attached to them. I didn't feel immersed at all as the choices were either lacking in substance and variety. The renders also aren't polished nor creative with camera angles and lighting. Not good

Finally tried the game because it wasn't convenient for me to play this on computer. Joiplay wasn't working so an android build for future versions would be great.

There isn't much to say because the story is really short, but I enjoyed it. The wife is really pretty and the ugly bastards targeting her are perfect. It is still hard to say how the story will go from here, but it will really be much more enjoyable if we have choices and feel that the choices does matter.

From what I see, there are 2 possible paths, netorase, willingly sharing her out and also netorare, a path where she gets too corrupted and we eventually lose her. I hope the netorare path gets done well, that would make the game perfect.

[Intro]
Positive:
*the wife is beautiful (what beats half of the other Netorase games).
*The animation is good.
*The plot is mid and a little rushed, but not terrible (way better than the other games where there is no action for mutiple updates)
*The Mc doesn't have a face (no even boddy for that matter) so the immersion is perfect.

Negative:
*The nts plot beggins with cheating, so not exactly a pure nts.
*And we have another generic ungly bastard (and it make zero sense to me how people like it).