VN - Ren'Py - Lustful Whispers [0.1 Remake] [Let's NTR]

not worth to play (version 0.1 remake).
All important content is hiden behind patreon paywall and even the uploaded version isn't the patreon version and some important files are missing.
If you want to play a game with all important content missing, then go on, else i recommend to save your time instead of downloading this "teaser version"

This game leaves a bad taste in the mouth, like the poorly made XXX movies of early 2000 or 90's, with bad actors trying to play a role, but do everything wrong.

Renders : 2/10 : we have basic HS design, shaders inexistant. The body shape is good, what to be expected of HS but really far from 2024 standards.
Animations : 2/10 : You can see the dick cliping throught the lips on blowjob and penetration is simply the disk passing throught the LI. Here again, the latest games base on Illusion games, offert far better animations than what we see here. Maybe if the game was from 10 years ago, but not now.
Story: 1/10 : I give one simply because there is a little introduction, but a soon as there is conversations it goes bad, I mean really bad.

Clearly this game feels out of it's time, but in a wrong way. We feel like playing an old school AVN with poor quality script.

Strengths :
- Wife is hot
- Renderings are acceptable -- 7 out of 10
- Animations are acceptable -- 7 out of 10
- The writing is good-- 7 out of 10

Weak points:
- So the personality fmc is very bad
- Before the start of ntr, we need events or backstories that will make us fall in love with fmc, but I haven't seen anything like this
- Fmc should be a hard girl instead of a slut, the majority of players, including me, do not like sluts and easy girls
- The logic of the game should be high, fmc should not sleep with other men for very childish reasons, mc should not cause ntr for stupid reasons
- For the atmosphere of this game, there is a need for choices, choices that end in the paths of nts and ntr (or soft ntr and hard ntr)

Not good. I feel that as a NTR game, you would want to let the players feel immersed with the story with being able to interact with choices that are somewhat meaningful to the route you are taking in the story. To give NTR games meaning you have to build a character(s) just enough for the players to emotionally be attached to them. I didn't feel immersed at all as the choices were either lacking in substance and variety. The renders also aren't polished nor creative with camera angles and lighting. Not good

Finally tried the game because it wasn't convenient for me to play this on computer. Joiplay wasn't working so an android build for future versions would be great.

There isn't much to say because the story is really short, but I enjoyed it. The wife is really pretty and the ugly bastards targeting her are perfect. It is still hard to say how the story will go from here, but it will really be much more enjoyable if we have choices and feel that the choices does matter.

From what I see, there are 2 possible paths, netorase, willingly sharing her out and also netorare, a path where she gets too corrupted and we eventually lose her. I hope the netorare path gets done well, that would make the game perfect.

[Intro]
Positive:
*the wife is beautiful (what beats half of the other Netorase games).
*The animation is good.
*The plot is mid and a little rushed, but not terrible (way better than the other games where there is no action for mutiple updates)
*The Mc doesn't have a face (no even boddy for that matter) so the immersion is perfect.

Negative:
*The nts plot beggins with cheating, so not exactly a pure nts.
*And we have another generic ungly bastard (and it make zero sense to me how people like it).