Looking forward to see what it becomes in the future.
The beginning is too long, when games does a long path, there's usually a lot of details in the environment. Here I think you should shorten it or put other things, like animals or smth to keep the player busy looking, or the girl talking from far away. Idk
Nice screamer, the second one got me. Not sure if you should keep them tho, in most games where you're chased, there isnt any screamer. But you're the one deciding how the game will be, not me
Different views of the sex scenes would be nice