Ren'Py - Mad Adventure [v0.1.4] [MorbusGreaves]

Mad Adventure [V0.3]
The game has a good potential
The renders, the female designs, the "corruption" scenes are excellent
I want to see what's more to come. The Dev is doing an amazing job so far.
I hope it does not get abandoned

My rating: 3.5/5 - Version: 0.3

I enjoyed the game so far but mostly because of the voluptuous models . I can't wait to see what happens with the sexy neighbors as well. This game has the potential to be one of the best for thicc lady lovers. The renders are beautiful and although some hope it isn't another harem game, I really hope it is lol. There isn't a lot of content yet but here are my thoughts on what needs to improve:

Dialogue - There are a few spelling errors and a lot of "haha's". You'd be better off describing what the character is doing (*she chuckles) to make it less repetitive. Also, maybe there is more to the story but the daughter seems to hate you one minute and then be fine the next without explanation.

Gameplay - The gameplay is fine. I understand it is early in development so not everything will have an interaction despite looking interactable but there just needs to be more to do. For example, it was Monday and I didn't have a task until Friday so I had to sleep several days without anything to do inbetween.

Content - There just isn't much to get the juices flowing yet! If there are some good H-scenes/animations added, this game would likely be a 5/5 for me regardless of the other issues because of the beautiful models. I hope to revisit so I can revise my review at a a later date.

Pros:
+ really damn nice renders
+ good animations
+ really damn sexy curved women (sometimes even a bit too curvy normally its the other way round lol) with surprisingly pretty faces
+ good text with some jokes
+ old doc
+ choices
+ solid amount of release version
- curious about the doc and the science project

Cons:
- not sure about the tags
- scared that it will be a typical harem game which would be boring cause thats what so many do...

not many cons, but they are for me personally important. i give the game easily 4 stars at the moment cause its aesthetically pleasing and has big potential BUT if its evolving into a typical teenage boy harem game i will be out and thats why i had to remove a star.

Five stars is a fair score Due to the Lovely original Female models, Animation is spot on, not a great deal of content but saying that what there is, Is well made! story's good but basic ATM, I see this as a good foundation to build upon

It's a worrying piece to play with.
Incredible quality, very little content, no sex scenes at all.
There have been too many of these games in the last two years, with different authors attracting donations with a brilliant opening, earning money and then disappearing .
The modeling is great, the tits are great, and it's a stark contrast to the sex scenes that aren't there at all.
I want to be a minimum of respect to the author:
2023 If this game updates more than 4 chapters, I will revise the review .

Even though this is just a demo, it's pretty amazing. The models look insaaaanely hot, graphics and image quality are super clean and nice, animations are fluid. What's more to ask for ? Honnestly, this game can become big and i hope so for the dev's sake, he put in a serious work in it and i hope it pays off. So far so good, can't wait to see what the future brings.

Gameplay
Controls: A click through visual novel.
Interface: Ren’py interface for dialogue, with occasional choices.
Writing
Plot: A good amount of set up for future updates.
Characters: Well written cliches.
Typos: A couple of them.
Art
Models: Models are well made.
Animations: Smooth and effective.
Background: As good as they need to be.
Audio
Music: N/A.
Effects: Used well.
Voices: N/A.

I don't normally try VNs until they are further along in development, but I thought I'd give this one a try due to the positive reviews and solid-looking thumbnails.

After playing for a few minutes, I am 95% sure the previous 5-star reviews were from the dev's alt accounts. This game is a mess. The best thing I can say is that the renders are decent (though the female characters' bodies have absurdly unnatural proportions). The writing is absolutely horrendous. I knew it was going to be rough when the very first line of dialogue already contained a typo, and it only got worse from there. Almost every single line of text contains some combination of spelling errors, punctuation errors, random capitalization (or lack thereof), and grammatical errors. The wording is often bizarre, and the conversations between characters are awkward and and unnatural. I gave up completely after about 10 minutes.

Impressive for 'just' a demo! Usually it's 2 short scenes and zero substance but this gave the player a good view on what's here and what's to come. (Looking great so far!)

Good prologue which explained the premise well, great art, i like the characters presented, the only question I have is whether you will have any sound eventually? If done well it adds a lot to scenes and situations.

Keep up the great work!

Great ambition with this game. Might need to change the thumbnail to attract more eyes though. Good renders, well-spent resources. Decent writing and fast-paced story. I prefer this linear style so please don't turn into a full-blown sandbox