Ren'Py - Mad Adventure [v0.1.7] [MorbusGreaves]

An interesting game hampered by the usual issues new games can struggle with.

So visually it's very nice, the renders are above average. Plot is.... a-typical but enough of a hook to keep you interested

The problem is the dialogue and just general spelling and grammar. My first thought was perhaps the dev isn't a native English speaker but there's a number of small typos which seem more like it hasn't been proof read. Spaguetti as opposed to spaghetti in one case, which would have been picked up by the simplest of spell checks. sentences not starting in upper case, names not capitalised, that sort of thing .

Not to mention the sudden appearance of a narrator. It could suggest the game doesn't have a solid story structure and is being done a bit more ad-hoc which could lead to ruin if the dev spends more time appeasing those who leave comments and less on telling the story they want to tell.

It's an ok game, it has the potentially to be really something but the small errors imply a lack of care of the end product and those things really need to be remedied if this game is to stand on its own feet and not just become another random game that got a few updates before disappearing into the aether.

Excellent game, right up my alley. Made for thicc lovers. Good story, good models. Everything about this game is great. Dont waste any time, just play it. I hope the developer never leaves the game and continues to update, please dev.

Looks great but the dialogue and writing kills it for me.

Story:

Guy goes to live with his Mom's ex-best friend that he hasn't seen since he was a kid. He's greeted by two cliché housewives and a half tsundere. It's the standard sandbox, not much content, no fillers, you just click and skip days until the "event" is available. So far you have: The typical needy and secretly cockhungry housewives. The bitchy childhood friend doing onlyfans for no apparent reason. A token spying perv sidekick. A old guy that wants you to perv on your roommates for him in order to help you find your missing parents and last but not least meta humans. Add all of that up and you get this masterpiece.

Dialogue:

Here's an example of the dialogue: MC: You look great, you can be a pornstar. Her: Really, I never really thought about it. MC: Maybe, you should drop your shoulder top. Her: Oh, okay.

Keep in mind this is after her just guilt tripping you about wanting to be a faithful housewive.

Other than that the dialogue is filled with the dialogue about the main character either being called a idiot, moron, dumbass or a combination of the two. He's a bit of a doofus but I've seen far worse.

Renders:

Good.

Animations:
Range from good to down right cheap.

Models:
Decent.

Overall:
It's too short, the dialogue could use a lot of work and so does the writing.

*Please Dont Let This Flop*

To start i just played the first 30 seconds of the game and im hooked. The models are the most beautiful pieces of art ive seen in a porn game. Simply amazing. I might be biased here (im an ass man) but, the animations and the pawgs are to die for. The story seems good, the dialog seems fun and interesting enough that you would want to read. Support the dev guys if you can.

And for the people who would be like OOOOOoooOoOohhhh tHe TiTtie In ThiS gAMme ArE toOo BiGGg... Fk u. Fk off and get a real girlfriend if you want realism in a video game. Too many good projects destroyed by whiners. To the dev, i love you. Keep up the good work.

This game has the best milf model since Dreams of desire. The models seem similar to Apocolust.

Edit: After completing the current game, i need to edit this review. The renders and animations looked good in 0.1 but the quality takes a massive downfall in 0.2 and 0.3. i understand that this is just an alpha and hope the dev keeps the quality from 0.1 consistent.

This Game Gets 7/10 .... Must try for everyone. Dev keep the updates coming.

Visually it is good/ok. Proportions feels a bit off, but I won't put that as negative, that's just a kink that I don't have.
Interactions are okay/decent with the girls (or 'MILF').

What put this in the average score to me is the 'game' part of it.
There was an improvement from v.2 to v.3, but is still feels rough.
There's not much content yet. Update .3 had more content/sex scenes than .2, at least.
It is just too early and the 4/5 rating feels just over the ceiling (and few reviews at the time I'm writing).
The dude next door introducing more women feels like a future sharing route, but I'm just guessing. Hope it will be a route/option, not mandatory.


This may grow to be a really good game, but so far is sits in the average we get here.
If the proportions and the teen/young guy setting tick your boxes, go for it.
Not really my cup of tea, but can't say it's bad either.
Average, but with potential.

Mad Adventure [V0.3]
The game has a good potential
The renders, the female designs, the "corruption" scenes are excellent
I want to see what's more to come. The Dev is doing an amazing job so far.
I hope it does not get abandoned

My rating: 3.5/5 - Version: 0.3

I enjoyed the game so far but mostly because of the voluptuous models . I can't wait to see what happens with the sexy neighbors as well. This game has the potential to be one of the best for thicc lady lovers. The renders are beautiful and although some hope it isn't another harem game, I really hope it is lol. There isn't a lot of content yet but here are my thoughts on what needs to improve:

Dialogue - There are a few spelling errors and a lot of "haha's". You'd be better off describing what the character is doing (*she chuckles) to make it less repetitive. Also, maybe there is more to the story but the daughter seems to hate you one minute and then be fine the next without explanation.

Gameplay - The gameplay is fine. I understand it is early in development so not everything will have an interaction despite looking interactable but there just needs to be more to do. For example, it was Monday and I didn't have a task until Friday so I had to sleep several days without anything to do inbetween.

Content - There just isn't much to get the juices flowing yet! If there are some good H-scenes/animations added, this game would likely be a 5/5 for me regardless of the other issues because of the beautiful models. I hope to revisit so I can revise my review at a a later date.

Pros:
+ really damn nice renders
+ good animations
+ really damn sexy curved women (sometimes even a bit too curvy normally its the other way round lol) with surprisingly pretty faces
+ good text with some jokes
+ old doc
+ choices
+ solid amount of release version
- curious about the doc and the science project

Cons:
- not sure about the tags
- scared that it will be a typical harem game which would be boring cause thats what so many do...

not many cons, but they are for me personally important. i give the game easily 4 stars at the moment cause its aesthetically pleasing and has big potential BUT if its evolving into a typical teenage boy harem game i will be out and thats why i had to remove a star.

Five stars is a fair score Due to the Lovely original Female models, Animation is spot on, not a great deal of content but saying that what there is, Is well made! story's good but basic ATM, I see this as a good foundation to build upon

It's a worrying piece to play with.
Incredible quality, very little content, no sex scenes at all.
There have been too many of these games in the last two years, with different authors attracting donations with a brilliant opening, earning money and then disappearing .
The modeling is great, the tits are great, and it's a stark contrast to the sex scenes that aren't there at all.
I want to be a minimum of respect to the author:
2023 If this game updates more than 4 chapters, I will revise the review .

Even though this is just a demo, it's pretty amazing. The models look insaaaanely hot, graphics and image quality are super clean and nice, animations are fluid. What's more to ask for ? Honnestly, this game can become big and i hope so for the dev's sake, he put in a serious work in it and i hope it pays off. So far so good, can't wait to see what the future brings.

Gameplay
Controls: A click through visual novel.
Interface: Ren’py interface for dialogue, with occasional choices.
Writing
Plot: A good amount of set up for future updates.
Characters: Well written cliches.
Typos: A couple of them.
Art
Models: Models are well made.
Animations: Smooth and effective.
Background: As good as they need to be.
Audio
Music: N/A.
Effects: Used well.
Voices: N/A.

I don't normally try VNs until they are further along in development, but I thought I'd give this one a try due to the positive reviews and solid-looking thumbnails.

After playing for a few minutes, I am 95% sure the previous 5-star reviews were from the dev's alt accounts. This game is a mess. The best thing I can say is that the renders are decent (though the female characters' bodies have absurdly unnatural proportions). The writing is absolutely horrendous. I knew it was going to be rough when the very first line of dialogue already contained a typo, and it only got worse from there. Almost every single line of text contains some combination of spelling errors, punctuation errors, random capitalization (or lack thereof), and grammatical errors. The wording is often bizarre, and the conversations between characters are awkward and and unnatural. I gave up completely after about 10 minutes.

Impressive for 'just' a demo! Usually it's 2 short scenes and zero substance but this gave the player a good view on what's here and what's to come. (Looking great so far!)

Good prologue which explained the premise well, great art, i like the characters presented, the only question I have is whether you will have any sound eventually? If done well it adds a lot to scenes and situations.

Keep up the great work!

Great ambition with this game. Might need to change the thumbnail to attract more eyes though. Good renders, well-spent resources. Decent writing and fast-paced story. I prefer this linear style so please don't turn into a full-blown sandbox