VN - Ren'Py - Maid to Please [v0.14.5] [Tutbork]

Congratz dev. Itz been a long time since I had a good play like this!
Nice history and the cool catch on sub route and love one.
Some characters need a bit more of spice, like Hanna's hair, but that is just my view.
Thank you and keep the good job. Good luck!

v0.13.3 4*
Its good! Better than I thought it would be honestly. From the description it sounds like a game designed to basically get you from one lewd scene to the next. While there are about the right amount of lewds, the game itself is quite good apart from that.

To start, the MC is well written! He is tends toward being the dominant partner in his reactions, but he doesn't come off as a red-pilled Andrew Tate wanabee. There's still respect. And he's confident without be an asshole. And the dude LOVES women. Not just for the lewd things, but he really really likes women. There's no misogyny here. Its quite refreshing.

The technicals things are fine. Renders and animations are good enough. The writing is above average. There's BGM thats only annoying some of the time. The girl's models are quite unique. Some will love em, some won't. I found most of the girls adorable. Nothing is truly amazing, but its all good enough. Hence 4*s rather than 5. Well worth playing.

This is surprisingly good, and also perhaps surprisingly, not some kind of maid trainer. So if you're thrown off by the name, don't be.

The women are kind of cool, though not top tier models you'd see in some other games, still attractive and have personality. The story is pretty good, and you are decisive, goal oriented, even dominant, without being an egomaniacal dick - which is wonderful.

Overall it is a rewarding game that doesn't quite go where you think it's going, and it's better for it. It is not a maid trainer, nor is it a stupid revenge story. There's a plot here, and as of yet it's a good one.

Maid to Please [v0.12.4] [Tutbork]

This game deserves a better rating. Yeah, the MC looks like weird Robert Pattinson from Twilight with even uglier eyebrows. I would've preferred if Beth was actually your "dad's" wife and not live-at-home girlfriend.' The MC's "dad" has some weird cuckhold dialog instructing the MC to flirt and dominate Beth. Nevertheless, the story is actually well written. The MC is presented with three routes with each character introduced: love interest, submissive, and no interest. Those routes are not set in stone either. The flexibility in your decisions is what sells the realistic aspect of the game. You can choose later to show no interest in a character. You can decided so show affection/love or force the character to submit to MC. The decisions are all-or-nothing either.

+ one of the best mc i ever played, i love how assertive and confident he is towards girls and every situation in the game.
+ Catalina (and her theme song)
+ beautiful girls
+ game has funny moments
+ music
+ a lot of pussy-eating scenes
+ story is ok, nothing spectacular
+ slow burn is nicely done..

- ..but with some girls is really too slow, there is literally 0 progress

easy 5 stars, mainly because of the awesome mc. Most of them are wimps and idiots in avn's, so this is something really refreshing

I think the main stimulus is that you're making out with your father's girlfriend... Beth, who by the way is the best-made character... the one with the most personality and a decent face, at first I was angry at the way she treated us at the beginning of the story, but as expected she magically gave in to MC's charms and forgot her boyfriend, MC's father, and we have MC's neighbor, girl next door, the way she is introduced into our I think the story is a little forced... like she's kind of innocent and has no idea about the things around her, what would be right or wrong, (easy to corrupt) and always used by the author for provocation (teasing), I think it's very bad when everything the mc will do is considered crossing the line, and the girl can invade us while the mc sleeps and give a blowjob to make up for the teasing, as a form of compensation. The Asian maid in the house could be used more often... participate more often in the content, as she is really very beautiful, and pleasant, and has a beautiful face compared to the other girls, but it seems like she is only used for teasing also, as for jessica... i really don't know how to say this but... that scene where the mc is following the corrupt police officer and looks to the side in the bar and jessica is standing there looking at him... the face Hers really left me worried... and I often asked myself if she was really supposed to be like that, it's very artificial, it doesn't fit... it's weird... although her role in the story is good, her appearance among all the girls It's the weirdest, the role of MC's father kind of doesn't make sense to me, there are times when MC openly says he's flirting with his girlfriend, and MC's father accepts saying that MC wouldn't have the slightest chance anyway. (wtf??) but everything with her has to be done hidden?? It kind of doesn't make sense to me, MC's father always implies that he favors MC... and respects him... but in a scene at the beginning, all it takes is one word from Beth and MC's father is against him, even MC's father calling his own girlfriend a gold digger, it doesn't make sense... in relation to the story, there seems to be a lot of parallel things happening at the same time which makes it quite confusing at first, but neither do the characters and not even the story holds my interest, either in terms of personality, history or appearance, especially because there isn't much in FAP... much less sex, there is more provocation, clearly a game that the developer has been perfecting over the years. time, but which just didn't hold my interest.

The game is true awesome.
You really go thought the story participating in it. All the characters are vivid and develops in time. What is good is an absence of insincerity or pretense.
Nice jokes (in moments I laughed a lot).
A rare game with respectful MC.
In sex scenes (as for now) the game has its boundaries and I like it.

I downloaded it because I thought it looked hot.
It still looks hot, but I got hooked on the story!

The graphics are good, with some nice animations.
The characters are believable and each have their own style.

This game is f-n' awesome!
I didn't like Jessica at first, but after a while she became my favorite character.
She's written so well that I feel like I can almost hear her heavy southern accent in my head

- Excellent writing, if a bit long-winded at times though that's a lot less annoying when the author actually has the chops to pull it off;
- Good renders and animations, though sometimes there are pretty long gaps between sex scenes;
- Believable characters and scenarios overall, a lot more immersive than most games regarding character behavior (story is still in 'movie plot' territory but it's miles better than most other stories and actually makes sense in it's own context)
- Affection and Submission paths for all NPCs (so far anyway) with Dominance path actually having some semblance of realism to it;
- Plenty of content, multiple scenes


Main points for not giving it a 5/5 rating:
- Narrative threads and dialogues can run a bit long
- Most choices seem to be of the Yes/No to scene variation
- Game keeps piling on NPCs and I worry the roster will become too bloated, sometimes less is more and the game already has plenty of attractive prospective partners

The writing for this had me completely gripped. It's also has the best "dominant" route that isn't just an excuse to be a domineering violent prick. MC is giving and dominant without being aggressive. The visuals are gorgeous too. Can't wait for where the author takes us

This is quite a nice find.

The renders are very decent, the soundtrack, while common, are quite fine as well.

Some of the faces, including the MC's, are a bit on the odd side though. I would not really call them cute by any stretch, and it might put off a some people.

Fapping wise, there are some scenes, which are all quite decent, and the quality of the animations is higher than many games around as well.

The story is not bad, although, not very believable, but still refreshing as despite being a revenge story, it is not really the typical story either.

I'd still recommend it, as all in all, this one is in the higher tier of games available in here.

Maid to Please [v0.9.3]
It is underwhelming, humiliation is very little. The story takes very long to unfold, I have skipped also all of it. Domination is also not really there. Pleasing is here to get sandwiches made.
I focus on visual, to see naked is very special.

The story is really interesting and the pacing feels really good. There aren't any penetration scenes yet but the pacing of the erotic scenes feel really good and all the scenes were really hot. Really looking forward to future updates

Good images. The story is quiet funny, although it seemed to be a bit rushed towards the end (actual: v 0.9.3). The story doesn't change too much between love/submissive choices, perhaps something to work on. I hope, the author will keep updating with the same quality.

This game is a big tease but i kinda like this type off tease. The story are simple and interesting. The girls locks greate and i like that their is diffrent type of content depending on your choice aff/dom (not to big once tho).

Overall the story keeps you going, but sometimes it can feel like it goes too slow. The girls are hot and the teasing can be to mutch sometimes, but for me personally its the good kind of teasing.

Version played : v0.8.3

This game could be renamed "Tease Simulator 3000". It is pretty good tho. I give it 5 stars even though it's more ~4, but I give 5 for it's potential in the future and as I feel that this 3.5 average is not representative of the quality.

The renders are alright, nothing special but good enough. Animations are kinda stiff and clunky but I don't really care about those.

The writing is pretty good and the plot is interesting, though we're still in the very early stages it would seem, and there are quite a few questions left to be answered.

Lewd scenes are aplenty, but as mentioned above mostly teases, there are a few meatier scenes but I guess more of them are to come in the future.

It's one of the better ones I played recently, made me chuckle a few times.

This would be a 3-4 star game, if not for one thing that completely ruins it for me. The rest of the review is going to be spoilery about that one thing.

The game lets you have choice in how to approach the women in the game until it forces you to be a rapist. I like some dark and nasty games that go much harder than this, but if the game implies the protagonist is the good guy, don't force me to play him as a rapist.

The game does make the classic move where the victim is suddenly into it, so technically only a handjob was forced and he was only doing that to show the stakes or something, but that already made the protagonist a rapist asshole without player agency. It feels like the writer wanted a rape scene and still have the protagonist be the hero, but the end result just ends up weird and confused. Still gonna see where it goes, but hard to be optimistic after this turn.

Version 0.8.3 review
i am really enjoying this game,

The writing is good, the story has enough to keep you very interested in what is going to happen. The internal dialogue that MC has a good level of humour.

The renders are really good, some of the characters are cute as hell and of course Beth is gorgeous.

I am using the mod and playing the Sub and Affection paths independently, there is a nice difference between how the story plays out.

@ the Dev, great work so far, cant wait for the next update, thank you

Review of v0.8.3 using multimod tool.

The sex scenes are pretty spicy and I enjoy the relationships between the characters but there's too much going on plot-wise. Definitely interested in seeing where this goes.

Story: You've just graduated college and are returning home to live with your dad* who has remarried a much younger woman while you were away. She's very cold towards you and you have the option of romancing her or putting her in her place. She's also in the process of hiring a new live-in maid, an Asian-American who everyone is casually racist towards for some reason. The maid has a little crush on the wife as well.

*He's technically not related to you and you keep trying to tell him this and getting interrupted but I don't even know why it matters other than to make you feel better about seducing his wife.

So that's the basic story: romance or dom your stepmom and the maid and decide what their relationship is to each other (are they both your slaves? does stepmom get to dom the maid, too? or will you make her serve the maid? or do you just want to charm them both?). I love it and would play this game six times or whatever. I will say, though, that the maid content is lacking compared to the stepmom content. You really get to interact with stepmom but with the maid it's a lot of peeping on her (she's claustrophobic so keeps her doors unlocked and showers with the door open ) or making her climb the pool ladder in front of you type stuff.

So that's a whole story, right? But there's so, so much more. There's also a neighbor girl who's just turning 18 as the story starts and her stepdad's a dick and she has two friends and one of them is part of the criminal element that is running rampant across the city so you decide to investigate and stop the crime for some reason and that brings you into contact with a crooked lady cop. Then, finally, there's the daughter of your dad's business acquaintance. She works as a nurse at the local hospital and also as a waitress at the local bar and feels very out of place with everything else going on.

I know I tend to complain that plots are "messy" but maybe devs should stop making them that way. There's a tendency for first-time devs to shove every story and fetish they can think of into one game. Dad/Stepmom/Maid/You quadrangle is a story. Neighbor's daughter "is all grown up now" and how you deal with her and her problems and her friends is a story. Vigilante crime investigator is a story. Whatever's going on with the business partner's daughter could be a short story. The problem with mashing them all together is that the reader is constantly wondering what happened to the story they care about during the other three.

The writing's good enough (engrish notwithstanding) that I'm willing to wait and see where this goes.


Gameplay: Pretty standard VN. I did use the multi-mod as a walkthrough (because life's too short) but you don't really need it. Most dialogues are either informational--where you just want to click everything before choosing the "end conversation" option--or you'll have three options: a dominant one (that raises the person's submission score), a romance one (raises their affection), and a neutral one that raises neither. So very straightforward. No complaints here.

That's it, if one of the plots appeals to you, it's worth checking out.