Escuro
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- Dec 11, 2019
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Alright a few things.
- Biggest thing - you forgot to give Marina any skills. She cannot do anything in combat.
- Speaking of combat, Doctor Frederick seems to negate 15 points of incoming damage. Remove this. Just give him more health. Because as it stands in the demo, only Harper can even attack him.
- The moaning from Julia's sex scene doesn't cut off when the next set of moans plays or the scene ends. It should. I read fast and it's not animated to be looked at for a while, which leads to moaning playing over the top of the next scene at HQ where they agree to send out a search party.
- Last thing is more of a nitpick, but I hate enemies that get to run from fights. Ol Doctor Fred let off explosives to escape. However, he was doing this to attempt to escape from a room with one exit. He would need to run past the women to escape. Thusly, Harper shoots him twice in the back and the threat is dealt with. A little animation of him jumping out a window or something would solve that, but still, it's just a nitpick I suppose.
- Biggest thing - you forgot to give Marina any skills. She cannot do anything in combat.
- Speaking of combat, Doctor Frederick seems to negate 15 points of incoming damage. Remove this. Just give him more health. Because as it stands in the demo, only Harper can even attack him.
- The moaning from Julia's sex scene doesn't cut off when the next set of moans plays or the scene ends. It should. I read fast and it's not animated to be looked at for a while, which leads to moaning playing over the top of the next scene at HQ where they agree to send out a search party.
- Last thing is more of a nitpick, but I hate enemies that get to run from fights. Ol Doctor Fred let off explosives to escape. However, he was doing this to attempt to escape from a room with one exit. He would need to run past the women to escape. Thusly, Harper shoots him twice in the back and the threat is dealt with. A little animation of him jumping out a window or something would solve that, but still, it's just a nitpick I suppose.
