VN - Ren'Py - Completed - Margaret's Sin [v1.1] [Red book]

Margaret's Sin [v1.1]

I'm very impressed by this short VN and am excited to see what the Dev has in store in the future.
It's a nicely done story with a beautiful artstyle and hot female character.
The sex scenes are really nice, although I wish some were a bit longer.
The only things that I'm not a fan of are single choices. I wish Devs would not do that and only offer choices if they give you different outcomes.
Single choices feel especially pointless during sex scenes and kills the flow of the scene.
A minor issue that I wished would've been done differently are a few renders during a sex scene that are too zoomed in.
That being said, it's a very good short VN and I wish the Devs of this game all the best with their new project and will follow their work closely.

A very nice project, with an uncomplicated and intricate story! Very much liked by our team!

We hope the guys will succeed and the project will be successful! Ready to provide all kinds of help if the guys will answer to the mail!

Short teaser (about 15 minutes) of a nicely presented story. The graphics are different and well implemented, the female voice acting is a triple A compared to what I've experienced so far.
At the moment it's more of a VN with no possible decisions (except the MC's name and skin color at the beginning). I for one hope that decisions will still be possible here so that Margaret isn't degraded to a total slut. She can be curious about sex, but that should also be possible with a romance.

Unfortunately, I can't fulfill the developer's request for a Steam wishlist because the title isn't available in my country.

Ooooh boy, I'm not one to vote demos usually, but this is great. Art is great, the concept is really good and the girl looks both hot and extremely endearing. I know this demo is just a proof of concept basically, but this is showing a lot of promise, so 5 stars to push this up there