3D-Daz Marshall 77 comics development

[Marshall 77]

hi here you can see the process of the comics i'm working on and tell me what you think of the comics and your suggestion for them.

You can see my other works on these threads
Mama's good boy https://f95zone.to/threads/mamas-good-boy.230455/
The Family's secret https://f95zone.to/threads/the-family-secrets-part-1-6-completed-marshall-77.239931/
Awaking holiday https://f95zone.to/threads/awaking-holiday-by-marshall-77.230289/
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[Marshall 77]

here some preview of my new comic My Mom Layla.

 

[stefu85]

for my taste, add a daughter too

 

[Marshall 77]

Layla Family

layla:Mid-40s, Old-minded, she clings to marriage and modesty but craves the release Omar can’t give

 

[Marshall 77]

Arslan(Layla son):19,Arslan’s a horny teen scheming for every woman,he’s plotting sly moves to make his fantasies real, no matter how risky.

 

[Marshall 77]

Omar(Layla husband)pushing 50,Omar’s a provider with a roving eye. Old-school values keep him grounded.

 

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Mina:Early 30s, Layla’s bold sister, Mina’s a confident vixen. Open-minded, she loves sex toys and breaking rules, pushing Layla to embrace pleasure.

 

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Lugo:Mid-30s, Mina’s chiseled fiancé, Lugo’s a smooth-talker,His flirty touches and hungry eyes spark tension, despite his open relationship with Mina. He’s bold, reckless, and competing with his brother Caleb for the prize.

 

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Caleb:21, Lugo’s slicker brother, Caleb’s a charmer with a knack for older women,Hungry and cunning, he’s locked in a heated rivalry with his brother to win their hearts.

 

[stefu85]

ok layla's sister, but we insist, you can add a daughter too, maybe corrupted by aunt to finally reach her sister after years, i've got already a story in mind

 

[Marshall 77]

ok layla's sister, but we insist, you can add a daughter too, maybe corrupted by aunt to finally reach her sister after years, i've got already a story in mind

Arslan going to college where his sister spend her last year there.

 

[Marshall 77]

for my taste, add a daughter too

Yasmin

 

[Marshall 77]

Here is chapter 1 of the MY Mom Layla

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[vermazusa]

Good start......could be an interesting story!

 

[bangarengo]

I would like this story to be predominantly incest/family sex, so those side characters (two brothers and so on) are completely in excess, unnecessary for me (unless we see them seducing their mom, but that could be another comic). I would have made mom (Layla) slightly more mature, just a little bit, more mature body, few wrinkles on her face and so on - like this maybe she doesn't have exactly that motherly-mature look to make everything more taboo. Then, i would create daughter, and make her seduced and fucked by her father (Omar) or even better - make main character Layla, get seduced and fucked by her own , older but still horny father, beside obviously her son, who is constantly trying to convince her to have sex. To end the story, as i would always do - some incest pregnancies.

 

[Marshall 77]

I would like this story to be predominantly incest/family sex, so those side characters (two brothers and so on) are completely in excess, unnecessary for me (unless we see them seducing their mom, but that could be another comic). I would have made mom (Layla) slightly more mature, just a little bit, more mature body, few wrinkles on her face and so on - like this maybe she doesn't have exactly that motherly-mature look to make everything more taboo. Then, i would create daughter, and make her seduced and fucked by her father (Omar) or even better - make main character Layla, get seduced and fucked by her own , older but still horny father, beside obviously her son, who is constantly trying to convince her to have sex. To end the story, as i would always do - some incest pregnancies.

thanks for feedback, Layla is uptight so her son alone won't be enough for her opening to incest and sex so the brothers are there for the sex part until she could accept Arslan too. but in MY Mom Layla we only see Arslan going after Layla. and in another comic i work on how Layla get into sex

 

[Marshall 77]

you can see the first 20 page of chapter 2 here:

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