VN - Ren'Py - Abandoned - Maternal Entanglements [Chapter 2] [DescoNTR]

Well, you guys are too harsh on this game.

Maybe its not the best game on this site but definitely not bad either. It's decent say the least. Enjoyable for those who likes thicc characters, which is me. One of the problems of the game is that the dialogues are so formal, but its okay. I would like to see more thicc characters in the future. Keep it up dev.

It loses a lot of attraction for me as a kinetic novel with no choice, but the plot is serviceable and the renders are pretty good. There is even some creativity in the characters!

I'd say it's worth your time if you like the fetish, but maybe wait for more content to have a more complete story.

Pros:
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Cons:
Graphics are terrible from 2000 era - 1*
Lots of clothes going in the characters -1*
The characters don't have shadows and when they do they look weird - 1*
The plot is nonsense - 1*
There is NO SEX in a porn game - 1*

Review of chapter 2

Models are nice, but everytime sex happens the game changes to the POV of another character that are usually away or having another conversation, no mystery ntr besides in one scene of chapter 1, or the sex is just time skipped.

It doesn't make sense, it's not a slow burn or a elaborated story, why skip the sex? Maybe the game was made to troll the critics and will be abandoned soon like all the other games from this dev.

Soz Dev, this is a hot mess on too many levels for me to turn a blind eye to.
Implying there's a choice between ntr& other stuff is very misleading (to be clear, there is no choice)
The artwork's not great and the scripting's worse.
I upgraded to from 1 star to 2 because i hate to give bad reviews.

PROS
+ nice rendered faces (especially like the one of the tall tanned woman)
+ curves (even they look a bit too much/artificial)
+ kink stuff which is way too rare many past months (ntr/oldguy stuff with curvy, mature women pretty much none existent game and comic wise)


CONS
- a bit too artifical curves/and too muscular women
- the not-sons looks cringe af (better get rid of them)
- no sexual content yet despite a straight to the point game


dialogue is a hit and miss. maybe describes the mind of many willingly pornactresses and hoes in general i could imagine.

for the most part this game got a vote from me and also more than 2 stars is cause of 3 things: - the womens faces, the potentiak curves and the kink. but otherwise it needs improvement.

Decent premise, definitely not the best execution.

I won't comment on the models because that is a very subjective opinion and I'm sure anyone looking to download the game can look at the images and form an opinion based on their own preferences before downloading.

Let's jump into what the game does right:
- It doesn't spend too long building up, neither does it jump right into the action within the first 10 frames. There is some decent build-up which is nice.
- There are some "implied" sex scenes, but not explicitly shown. This could be considered either a good or a bad thing but for now, I'll classify that as a plus. It can be tasteful if some things are left to imagination, but will quickly get annoying if there is not a single explicit sex scene in sight.

Now, for the bad:
- There are absolutely no choices as of v1.0, Chapter 1. The player has zero control over what happens, even with regards to determining WHO the MC's mother will sleep with. At the very least, there could have been a choice between willingly getting out of the way to allow the mother to get laid or to try and resist but she gets laid anyways.
- Pointless exposition. Of course, there is always an expected amount of dialogue or narration to read in most Ren'Py games, but this one in particular is a visual novel with copious amounts of unnecessary, long exposition with no payoff - so far at least. Having choices or shorter, more concise narration would have helped keep things interesting but for now, I think the game might only appeal to people with too much patience for it.

All in all, it's a decent story but that's about it - it feels like something that is better suited for erotica than as a game.

I went to play with low expectations, but ended up enjoying it a lot, possibly surprised me. I think Raùl's Mother can be more provocative, provocation is good for cooking NTR and corruption, for example, in the scene where she decides to stop being the beloved wife and mother and goes back to the living room with another lingerie, I think that she could have teased more in that scene, instead of going too quickly to the bedroom, we tease more, show a close up of that ass, after all, she needs to tease a lot since she's just starting her hotmommy path.