An interesting taster so far. I especially like Ember's questline so far, as I always enjoy a little campy superhero content and I wasn't expecting that twist. Betty's content is oddly heartwarming too, given what the maid reveals. I like the 'older girl who is a bit of a affectionate bully' theme Abby has going on, though the transformation content isn't really to my personal taste. Jun's stuff was pretty funny, and where two of the only penetration scenes are so far unless you count a marker up the ass.
That said on that last note, if I had one constructive criticism, it's that pretty much everything is teasing; the hole in the way scene and the alley scene with the gropers are just blueballers when they could have been amazing or at least had the option of progressing to harder scenes if you messed up somewhere or made a choice 'wrong' (or right). May always seems to conveniently escape peril at the worst possible time for the player, which in my subjective opinion detracts from the game and means I'm more likely to boot something else up if I feel the itch. I remember a lot of games used to do that same thing a long while ago, though I don't recall the motivations (distribution platforms not liking hardcore content maybe?), and I've got to be honest it's reminding me of those days in a somewhat bad way. Not trying to be a dick or anything, I just wanted to share my thoughts.
I do love the artstyle and the theme, not to mention the writing, and I'm hoping there will be slightly harder scenes later or perhaps expansions of existing ones. My concerns may just end up being how early the content is and May being eased into stuff. (I am and will probably remain a little salty about the hole in the wall and alleyway scenes though, as they can be some of my favourites, and they felt 'wasted'.)
Edit: Ah, I just read back a page, and saw that the game is probably never going to have harder scenes when it comes to the alleyway or hole in the wall. And while that's fair I think you might want to pre-warn your players about that in some way, because the last thing you want is someone getting hours in and feeling like you wasted their time with what 'looks' like content they will enjoy but purposefully pivots away because of developer tastes. You noted to that other poster that you like the anticipation element of such things, and that's fair as everyone has their tastes, but to counter that is it really anticipation of there is never any follow-through? Anticipation without the intent to carry out could just be called teasing. In this case, and in the example scenes, you will have probably just pulled out your dick by the time the scenes end just as they seem to be 'getting to the good part'. The last thing you want as a porn game dev is to have your players drop a title because scenes keep ending before anything even happens.
Don't get me wrong, I'm still interested in the Ember/Abby/Betty content, and you did note that there is some chance of some non-con with monsters, I'm just a little disappointed is all. I'll be following the project for sure.
Thanks for the feedback! ^^
And sorry for the disappointment. I understand where you're coming from.
While I don't particularly hate sex or anything, I find it the least interesting part of the human sexual experience. There are so many fascinating and titillating experiences to be had aside from rubbing genitals together, and so I'm frequently let down by doujins as they like to get straight into sex 5 pages in, and bombard us with it nonstop for the remaining 25 pages. In fact, I'm the kind who almost always closes the doujin right when the sex starts, and frequently search for tags like "exhibitionism", "no penetration" and "nudity only". But I understand I'm the exception rather than the rule, as 99% of all R18 doujins show. Tho I'm very glad for, through this game, having found plenty of people who also share in those preferences.
I see your point with the anticipation without a pay off, but at the same time it's what I personally enjoy the most. It's similar to an ecchi anime, that will rarely have sex, but will make sure to get you hard every episode. Maybe you watch an ecchi anime and think "man, they'd totally be having sex if the broadcast allowed it", but instead I'm just thinking "man, I wish they kept everything the same, but without the censorship".
Not every scene needs to have a high-energy, climax finish either. Consider this game a prolongued edging session. You can take it slow and enjoy the ride, even if the game seems to "pull out right before". Maybe it never intended to make you cum right away, but would rather see you keep coming back for more
But in terms of warning the player that they won't see any full sex scenes anytime soon, I wonder what would be best. This is an exhibitionism/ENF and teasing game first, after all. But I don't want to add tags like "no sex", since I actually am adding those down the line (already got one light yuri scene, and we're getting another much bolder one very soon). Also, if you play adult visual novels, you're probably used to playing for 20 hours before seeing the first sex scene. So I think somehow getting expections in order should do it.
Anyway, thanks again for the feedback! I hope my ramblings made sense, and hopefully you'll stick around to see content I feel will suit your tastes better! xD