The developers obviously have talent but the end result is disappointing.
The story and characters are interesting and have personality. The dialogue has optional selections that are creative, interesting, and funny.
Unfortunately those options are all the wrong answers. The main character, who is supposed to be a tough manly man, is forced to play a lame passive uninteresting character to advance the plot. The interesting situations that he finds himself in are never leveraged into anything. It's like watching a porno where obvious situations should occur but just don't.
Eventually, if you pick enough lame answers, he builds points with the ladies after which he gets to ask them nicely for consent at every step of the way to the point of nausea. Its a game, you don't have to make it like reality. Its just overall very bizarre. You have an attractive man surrounded by attractive women who all just want to lecture him, over and over, well into the story. I'm not saying it has to be written like a porno, but it doesn't have to be written like women don't enjoy sex either.
There are some real missed opportunites for the MC to behave badly, which would really spice up the game. Make them bad endings if you want.
Overall it has a lot of potential but falls flat as an adult game. It starts off as if a male domination game but then starts to feel more like a female domination game. I think this will confuse people especially if they start picking the male domination answers but then never get anwhere with the women and miss out on content.
Other feedback:
The visuals and renders are good. The character details are good.
The story pacing and camera movement during scenes is good.
The grammar and spelling are good.
The amount of content is good but lacking punch.
The dialogue is good but I had to start skipping it because the "correct" answers were all boring.
The story and characters are interesting and have personality. The dialogue has optional selections that are creative, interesting, and funny.
Unfortunately those options are all the wrong answers. The main character, who is supposed to be a tough manly man, is forced to play a lame passive uninteresting character to advance the plot. The interesting situations that he finds himself in are never leveraged into anything. It's like watching a porno where obvious situations should occur but just don't.
Eventually, if you pick enough lame answers, he builds points with the ladies after which he gets to ask them nicely for consent at every step of the way to the point of nausea. Its a game, you don't have to make it like reality. Its just overall very bizarre. You have an attractive man surrounded by attractive women who all just want to lecture him, over and over, well into the story. I'm not saying it has to be written like a porno, but it doesn't have to be written like women don't enjoy sex either.
There are some real missed opportunites for the MC to behave badly, which would really spice up the game. Make them bad endings if you want.
Overall it has a lot of potential but falls flat as an adult game. It starts off as if a male domination game but then starts to feel more like a female domination game. I think this will confuse people especially if they start picking the male domination answers but then never get anwhere with the women and miss out on content.
Other feedback:
The visuals and renders are good. The character details are good.
The story pacing and camera movement during scenes is good.
The grammar and spelling are good.
The amount of content is good but lacking punch.
The dialogue is good but I had to start skipping it because the "correct" answers were all boring.