VN Ren'Py Meet MARY and her evolution!

[Lost Elite VN]

Hey there!

This is Mary our main character… how is looking and how will look! Mary is gonna get corrupted by sex, BDSM, bad partners and affairs. Keep in touch with her story!

Do you like her? Type below some feedback!

 

[Hadley]

She should probably stay like that. I wouldn't want to touch the Girl on the right with a stick.

 

[GreenGobbo]

Art looks okay.

Good luck with your project.

 

[Lerd0]

...nice art..
...prefer the before tho.......
..and good luck....

 

[Lost Elite VN]

Art looks okay.

Good luck with your project.

Thanks! Will show more finished stuff soon!

 

[Lost Elite VN]

...nice art..
...prefer the before tho.......
..and good luck....

Looks like everyone prefer the before… It’s for something in particular?

 

[Lerd0]

Looks like everyone prefer the before… It’s for something in particular?

...i like nerd girls.......
...do what u want tho...game's urs.....
..will still play it when it comes out.....

 

[Deleted member 229118]

The right one would look better if she was wearing a slave collar instead of a neckless.

This picture reminds me that woman dye there hair.
False advertisment..
*old man grumbles*

 

[Geralt_R]

It would be more original maybe if the Mary on the right was the before and Mary on the left was the after... reverse corruption by the awesome power of wholesomeness. Something fresh! This whole "nerdy librarian type becomes the biggest slut on the planet" trope is maybe a bit old and overdone? I have yet to find a game that goes the opposite direction.

So I would always go for Mary on the left and entirely ignore Mary on the right, unless there was a way to turn Mary on the right into Mary on the left.

The art itself is perfectly fine! It's unique and I like it.

 

[anne O'nymous]

This picture reminds me that woman dye there hair.
False advertisment..
*old man grumbles*

This one also dye her eyebrows.

 

[Lost Elite VN]

It would be more original maybe if the Mary on the right was the before and Mary on the left was the after... reverse corruption by the awesome power of wholesomeness. Something fresh! This whole "nerdy librarian type becomes the biggest slut on the planet" trope is maybe a bit old and overdone? I have yet to find a game that goes the opposite direction.

So I would always go for Mary on the left and entirely ignore Mary on the right, unless there was a way to turn Mary on the right into Mary on the left.

The art itself is perfectly fine! It's unique and I like it.

We are still working on it but the feedback is going great to create a better game!

 

[Lost Elite VN]

The right one would look better if she was wearing a slave collar instead of a neckless.

This picture reminds me that woman dye there hair.
False advertisment..
*old man grumbles*

Got iiit will talk with the team to add it!

 

[Lost Elite VN]

This one also dye her eyebrows.

Absolutely