VN - Ren'Py - Melissa's Adventures [Ch.1 v7] [CosmoK]

I have never seen a more beautiful garden. Not in reality or on this site! This early version has some artwork of exceptional quality. There is already plenty of subtle eroticism in the developing (love?) story between a Melissa and a sweet boy. I believe this project has great potential, and I hope the developer does not get discouraged by some heartless comments on this site, trying to stomp out a beautiful flower before it can bloom!

Wow... I try to give every game starring a hot, curvy milf its time of day, but Melissa's Adventures has to be one of the worst VNs I have ever played on this site.
First of all, let's address the elephant in the room: There are TONS of missing images and incomplete scenes. I know you're calling this "an Alpha", but this isn't even in that stage; this is like in the proof of concept stage.
Second, and very glaring, the dialog is absolutely terrible. It almost seems like it is either AI generated, or shoved through some sort of translator. People do not talk like this, and it takes you out of the experience immediately.
Also, what the hell is up with getting a game over, and the game immediately closes out? No main menu, or nothing, just flat out closes.
Sure, the model for Melissa is hot, but this game is littered with so many red-flags, and technical issues. I don't often say this so bluntly, stay away from this game!

the game seems to be good, but flat, dark and the text could be done beautifully and neatly, and the choice you make is a dark screen and text in the middle of the screen and then the text goes down and then there are no pictures what kind of not-ready game is a so-so game why was it shown at all