Where do I start? The writing is just bland and there are quite a few mistakes. MC is a wimp, which is annoying and he is too, quite bland. There was this scene where the MC stares at a girl without saying anything. After she asked a single question or two the MC thinks: 'Why is she so interested or is she just nice?' The charcters often react unnatural and have no chemistry between them at all. MC has a best friend since childhood days, he even had a crush on her. Yet they don't have anything in common, no similiar interests. The big thing the game has, are it's dreams, they are kinda boring and not funny.