Its so slow not gonna lie, though while the plot interests me nothing too much happening is slowly dampening the experience.
v0.3 update summed up: text, text, and some more text. Total sexy stuff amount: 0, not even a single nipple is shown.
Now I guess there may be people interested in this sort of content, which is totally fine. I'm personally not, so before dropping this game for good I want to ask the dev to consider the possibility of having an "abridged" version, where dialogues don't drag towards infinity, whilst being able to follow the story (which I sadly have chosen to skip so far, for the above reason). Maybe you can add a setting in the options and enclose "flavor" text inside conditional blocks of code, which would require very little effort from your side.
To quit this game would be a real pity, its quality is very high and I can easily see that. But, as I said, the dialogues are what is killing the enjoyment for me, so far.
Now I guess there may be people interested in this sort of content, which is totally fine. I'm personally not, so before dropping this game for good I want to ask the dev to consider the possibility of having an "abridged" version, where dialogues don't drag towards infinity, whilst being able to follow the story (which I sadly have chosen to skip so far, for the above reason). Maybe you can add a setting in the options and enclose "flavor" text inside conditional blocks of code, which would require very little effort from your side.
To quit this game would be a real pity, its quality is very high and I can easily see that. But, as I said, the dialogues are what is killing the enjoyment for me, so far.
darlic, I'm really sorry you don't like the dialogue in my game...and that's fine. Unfortunately, I can't please everyone and make the game so that it suits everyone. I make the game the way I see it and try to keep the game's lore in mind. Where the main roles are students who are experiencing their first emotions, first love, and first disappointment. And this is all supported by long monologues and dialogues to fully convey all their feelings. As it is written in the notes this is a heavy visual novel where everything develops gradually. Now I am adding side characters that will dilute these "boring monologues" so with 0.4 I'll be introducing more h-scenes and we will get to know each girl's fetishes etc. I can say that I'm developing the game the way I feel and see it otherwise why would I do something I don't want to? I read all the comments and try to make adjustments to the game. Thanks for your opinion, thanks for making the game better.
Having just finished playing for the first time, I personally had almost no issues with the dialogues - yeah, sometimes the internal ones did appear to drag on a little bit too long, but the content itself is original and somewhat refreshing, therefore it did not bother me that much. The way I see it, it's actually one of strong points of the game, the plot and character development itself being the other ones. Without first setting up the stage and establishing each girl, the impact of any sex scene might not feel as strong. Those games that do it well are the games that leave an impression on you, not the amount and variety of fu**ing, imo.
The only other issue I noticed is some errors in the text: wrong pronoun used / line of dialogue assigned to the wrong character / some typos. And maybe its me, since I am not a native speaker myself, but some lines / expressions don't convey the meaning that they're supposed to, almost as if they were MTL-ed, but, once again, since there is plenty of lines exchanged during every single conversation, I did get where the author was going with it.
Thanks, and looking forward to see what happens next, now that multiple brand new characters have been introduced.
The only other issue I noticed is some errors in the text: wrong pronoun used / line of dialogue assigned to the wrong character / some typos. And maybe its me, since I am not a native speaker myself, but some lines / expressions don't convey the meaning that they're supposed to, almost as if they were MTL-ed, but, once again, since there is plenty of lines exchanged during every single conversation, I did get where the author was going with it.
Thanks, and looking forward to see what happens next, now that multiple brand new characters have been introduced.
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I thoroughly enjoyed this. It could just be because it's also made with Koikatsu, but it reminded me of Lessons in Love but without the supernatural elements. The writing can get a little tedious when it's just description, but I enjoy the romance dialogue a lot.
I definitely look forward to the pregnancy content and do hope the students get included in that.
I definitely look forward to the pregnancy content and do hope the students get included in that.
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Thanks for the info, i will look forward to it.DarkMiros, The ending will be with all the main characters (girlfriend, wife...).Solo endings (mс+1 girl), threesome
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Hey everyone, how's it going?
Update 0.4 is going pretty well. At the moment day 9 is completely written and 80% of the scenes are done. Right now I'm working on finishing day 9 and moving on to creating the next day. Starting with the v.0.4, patrons will be voting to choose two girls with whom they want to see "extra scenes" that will develop a side story through which you'll learn their fetishes and more "love or non-love story". Dorothy and Lola won the vote so they get their time and scenes. On day 9, you finally get to see the focus club that you'll be attending for a week and you also finally get to see Dorothy's hobbies. Do you think she can surprise you? This update will be mostly about Dorothy...but the other girls will get their time too. In this update you'll also see two new characters. A nurse and a future swim club candidate. I'm sure these two girls will find fans among you as well
Now about day 10. This day is going to consist more of an investigation into the attack on Ivy and the possible complicity of other students. The girls are starting to dictate their terms...I hope you manage to put control within the school. Nicole(Jap. teacher) is one of the few who will help you with that. I'll try not to focus too much on the text so that the game doesn't turn into a Sherlock Holmes book As I said in a previous post, you'll only see half day 10....In future updates I'll try to end the day fully and not use cliffganger. I know it's necessary at some points, but using it in every update seems too dumb to me....I hope you enjoy this update I tried to balance text and h-scenes. Approximate release date in early March. Have a good day, cheers.
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I actually love the writing focus that seems to be at play here. There are some basic grammatical errors, but that isn't something I see as an issue. I actually came over from Lessons in Love, another writing focused game, specifically because of the writing focus as it was recommended for it in other threads.
I know a lot of people on F95 prefer a porn focus, where you at least get to the sex quickly if not get it immediately, but those are a dime a dozen here, there's plenty of that. Really well written games with a writing focus that also deliver sexual content are not so common, maybe even enough to consider them rare. Keep up the good work BRdsky.
I know a lot of people on F95 prefer a porn focus, where you at least get to the sex quickly if not get it immediately, but those are a dime a dozen here, there's plenty of that. Really well written games with a writing focus that also deliver sexual content are not so common, maybe even enough to consider them rare. Keep up the good work BRdsky.
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Unfortunately the 0.4 update will be delayed due to the war in my country.
He wrote this when we talked in private on March
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