My reviews are more like critiques cause I want to see them get better (so I always say "take it with a grain of salt")
The only thing I think the dev should practice is brevity. For example, You don't need 8 shots in different angles of Radia stepping out of the shower. or 7 shots of her just vacuuming. Don't get me wrong, I like what I see, but it's just more work on your end and it's a bit redundant. There's a reason movies and comics only do 2 to 3 shots to get the point across.
Also, is it a culture thing? for a French mother to make cereal for her grown ass kid? That's a little weird- not gonna lie.
The only thing I think the dev should practice is brevity. For example, You don't need 8 shots in different angles of Radia stepping out of the shower. or 7 shots of her just vacuuming. Don't get me wrong, I like what I see, but it's just more work on your end and it's a bit redundant. There's a reason movies and comics only do 2 to 3 shots to get the point across.
Also, is it a culture thing? for a French mother to make cereal for her grown ass kid? That's a little weird- not gonna lie.