HTML Miami Crime [v0.82] [MercuryDev]
- Jan 16, 2020
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Is there a "Sonny Crockett", a "Ricardo Tubbs", a "Martin Castillo" and of course a Ferrari in this game ?
Is there a speed-up-function? The text so boring slow at the beginning. And then the gameplay.... Holy shit is that boring.
I really love your writing, and the excellent kinky prose you use for the sex scenes.
The theme is right up my alley with the emphasis on rough, passionate sex, messy face-fucking, hyper-stamina and the women being overwhelmed with pleasure; the flavour describing the girl's sultry femininity is extremely hot.
Despite surface similarities, the variety in phrasing and descriptive text made all the scenes individually enjoyable.
I was kind of hoping the pregnancy content would be part of the smut, but the inheritance system seems promising.
The game is brief, but I like how all the women are characterized as cunning allies, each with their own specialty, and how well that feeds into the gameplay, as gaining their favour makes the game much easier.
Wicked delightfully immoral women makes for very entertaining erotica, I especially loved the police informant, and netori'ing the rival mafia boss's daughter.
I wasn't actually sure what was improving my relationship with each of the girls, as it didn't seem to always correlate to choices I made, but I think separating most of the sex from the stat choices (or only having a handful that can be navigated with the right resources/allies/stats) alleviates the pain point Manreign had.
Most of the stat choices are just about tactical decisions running your criminal empire rather than roleplay, which was a big issue with the original Reigns franchise.
Making the roleplay and core content distinct from the gameplay challenge feels more cohesive.
The gameplay overall felt quite good and unobtrusive, having tools you gradually unlock to help manage your stats is an excellent iteration on the formula, and making the girls important allies rather than the dilemma's themselves feels a lot better.
It did seem like most of the money investments like the gang and the businesses don't have a great return, or at least, by the time you actually earn money enough in the game to unlock them, the challenge is over (around 1984).
I'll have to revisit FFM as well, it's awesome seeing you improve, great work!
The theme is right up my alley with the emphasis on rough, passionate sex, messy face-fucking, hyper-stamina and the women being overwhelmed with pleasure; the flavour describing the girl's sultry femininity is extremely hot.
Despite surface similarities, the variety in phrasing and descriptive text made all the scenes individually enjoyable.
I was kind of hoping the pregnancy content would be part of the smut, but the inheritance system seems promising.
The game is brief, but I like how all the women are characterized as cunning allies, each with their own specialty, and how well that feeds into the gameplay, as gaining their favour makes the game much easier.
Wicked delightfully immoral women makes for very entertaining erotica, I especially loved the police informant, and netori'ing the rival mafia boss's daughter.
I wasn't actually sure what was improving my relationship with each of the girls, as it didn't seem to always correlate to choices I made, but I think separating most of the sex from the stat choices (or only having a handful that can be navigated with the right resources/allies/stats) alleviates the pain point Manreign had.
Most of the stat choices are just about tactical decisions running your criminal empire rather than roleplay, which was a big issue with the original Reigns franchise.
Making the roleplay and core content distinct from the gameplay challenge feels more cohesive.
The gameplay overall felt quite good and unobtrusive, having tools you gradually unlock to help manage your stats is an excellent iteration on the formula, and making the girls important allies rather than the dilemma's themselves feels a lot better.
It did seem like most of the money investments like the gang and the businesses don't have a great return, or at least, by the time you actually earn money enough in the game to unlock them, the challenge is over (around 1984).
I'll have to revisit FFM as well, it's awesome seeing you improve, great work!
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Wow. This is just... wow. Thank you, thank you very much. I can't stress enough how much I appreciate this sort of feedback. It's heartwarming and inspiring. Wow.
If you decide to swing by my Discord server (or if you happen to be a member already), let me know what your username is so I could give you the "dignified" role - basically this one grants you Patreon bonuses for free, my only way to express my gratitude apart from simple words.
I got some tired thoughts here which I'll probably revisit in the morning.
Things I like:
Things I don't like:
Things I (personally) hope to see in the future:
Things I like:
- The presentation is pretty good, I'm a sucker for synthwave aesthetics. On that note, the soundtrack is a banger.
- The writing is pretty decent! I'm always annoyed by games where repeatable sex scenes are just a single gif, or one paragraph, or both, but this has some nice character to it!
- The characters are cool! The art used for them having a GTAV-esque style to it tickles my fancy, and the scenes for the girls are generally... nice
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Things I don't like:
- The tutorial says the game has NG+ of sorts and is supposed to end in 1990, but I've made it to February of '91 and I see no way to start NG+. 'Course, 'it's 2am by me so I could just be too tired to find it.
- The imbalance of stat changes. There's a lot more ways to increase stats than there are to reduce them, it feels like the only way to reduce them is lay low, rob a bank to piss the cops off, or pray you get a Situation that will let you lower what you need lowered.
- MichelleFuck in the gallery using a BJ for its gif, but that's more of a nitpick than anything
Things I (personally) hope to see in the future:
- An expansion of the marriage/heir/family system (I feel like there's a lot of room here for special content and/or bonuses here - scenes with a girl that are unique to when she's your wife, having more or less starting sympathy with a character depending on how much your predecessor had, stuff like that)
- More statuses and/or events (The former provided an interesting challenge to overcome or a nice bonus to gain, and the latter had some nice story and the occasional sex scene)
- More Carla content (Lads love a woman in uniform)
Thank you very much for your kind words! I personally am a sucker for thorough feedback, and on that note, your post is a banger!I got some tired thoughts here which I'll probably revisit in the morning.
Things I like:
- The presentation is pretty good, I'm a sucker for synthwave aesthetics. On that note, the soundtrack is a banger.
- The writing is pretty decent! I'm always annoyed by games where repeatable sex scenes are just a single gif, or one paragraph, or both, but this has some nice character to it!
- The characters are cool! The art used for them having a GTAV-esque style to it tickles my fancy, and the scenes for the girls are generally... nice
Things I don't like:
- The tutorial says the game has NG+ of sorts and is supposed to end in 1990, but I've made it to February of '91 and I see no way to start NG+. 'Course, 'it's 2am by me so I could just be too tired to find it.
- The imbalance of stat changes. There's a lot more ways to increase stats than there are to reduce them, it feels like the only way to reduce them is lay low, rob a bank to piss the cops off, or pray you get a Situation that will let you lower what you need lowered.
- MichelleFuck in the gallery using a BJ for its gif, but that's more of a nitpick than anything
Things I (personally) hope to see in the future:
Overall, a bit barebones but I love the presentation and I think the content that's currently there shows it has a lot of promise!
- An expansion of the marriage/heir/family system (I feel like there's a lot of room here for special content and/or bonuses here - scenes with a girl that are unique to when she's your wife, having more or less starting sympathy with a character depending on how much your predecessor had, stuff like that)
- More statuses and/or events (The former provided an interesting challenge to overcome or a nice bonus to gain, and the latter had some nice story and the occasional sex scene)
- More Carla content (Lads love a woman in uniform)
The NG+ hasn't been implemented yet, as well as any kind of an ending. Sorry about the misleading parts of the tutorial. I'll also try to think of additional ways to control your stats and specifically decrease them. And lastly, I'll do my best to make sure Carla gets enough content to satisfy your needs, hehe.
I don't want it to seem like I intentionally encourage people to pump my rating on F95 in exchange for benefits. But. I hope nobody minds if I offer you the same thing I offered to ashrana88. It's not about "gimme a positive review -> get bonuses for free", not at all. It's just that not that many folks take their time and dedicate it to writing a proper and thoughtful post like yours, let alone a review with rating. Shit like this makes my day and fuels me with energy to work.
Ah, I getcha. That sort of thing happens in development I suppose lol.
I'm glad. There were definitely a few times where I only just got by the skin of my teeth, and more than a few times where two of my stats would be monstrously high and my other two monstrously low, so having a bit more control over them will be nice!
Also yea bwoi more Carla heheh
Oh I get what you mean about feedback, don't worry! I'm also making a game in HTML (though it's not smut), and advice, compliments, and critiques are my second favorite things to receive (right behind asks about the lore lmao). If you're comfortable with making me that offer, I'll send you a DM with my Discord username in a minute.