The best AI game that I played so far.
The art is gorgeous!
JK. But what I'll say - it IS frighteningly consistent. Most of the time I don't even need to keep up my suspension of disbelief cos of the AI art - it's that good.
Not perfect.
But I'm very impressed.
Dialogues are hot.
Writing in general, on the other hand, is... inconsistent - especially in the flow department - especially with the fat guy arc. It's dragging for far too long. His character (past, present, and future) needs to be flashed out DURING the hot sex scenes - or at least during just hot scenes - instead of awkward dialogues that do nothing for the porn aspect of the game.
Though during this arc FMC is much more likable - so that's a progress.
So yeah, it's apparent that author's new to this whole writing thing and is trying something different with every update. Can't blame him for fumbling a little at the start. Hope he'll figure it out.
In general:
AI art is surprisingly consistent.
Dialogues during sex scenes Are Hot.
Characters talk like humans.
There ARE characters.
There are also clear kinks and promises on them.
Writing is great in some places and fumbling in others.
Overall it was an enjoyable read with good promise for the future.
5 stars, though, for the best AI game I ever played.
The art is gorgeous!
JK. But what I'll say - it IS frighteningly consistent. Most of the time I don't even need to keep up my suspension of disbelief cos of the AI art - it's that good.
Not perfect.
But I'm very impressed.
Dialogues are hot.
Writing in general, on the other hand, is... inconsistent - especially in the flow department - especially with the fat guy arc. It's dragging for far too long. His character (past, present, and future) needs to be flashed out DURING the hot sex scenes - or at least during just hot scenes - instead of awkward dialogues that do nothing for the porn aspect of the game.
Though during this arc FMC is much more likable - so that's a progress.
So yeah, it's apparent that author's new to this whole writing thing and is trying something different with every update. Can't blame him for fumbling a little at the start. Hope he'll figure it out.
In general:
AI art is surprisingly consistent.
Dialogues during sex scenes Are Hot.
Characters talk like humans.
There ARE characters.
There are also clear kinks and promises on them.
Writing is great in some places and fumbling in others.
Overall it was an enjoyable read with good promise for the future.
5 stars, though, for the best AI game I ever played.