angel__666
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- Nov 24, 2023
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I like the way you feel the character, putting yourself in it's shoes. I agree 100% what you say, once a game reaches some point of depravity it's difficult to keep showing the character's personality at every new event... It becomes just a hard sex challenge. That's why the precursor moments before that peak comes is so important.No, I think I’ll switch to the NTS route in the summer, after the first couple of H-scenes with Mila and Kiki. But I might need to do a revision of the old art first and fix them so the style change isn’t so noticeable (if you compare the current art to the art from the NTS route, the difference is pretty obvious). Also, the beginning really annoys me, it feels like it’s poorly written and poorly done from technical side. I want to redo it too. I’m not sure if I’ll take that on or just leave it as it is.
The NTR route isn’t finished, there are still the camgirl, sugarDaddy, Liz routes, and the "ending" without modifications – not only are they unfinished, they’re basically not even started. I originally planned to make the BBC route a bit different, but I ran out of energy. Mila in that route already looks more like just her shell, she’s essentially empty. Writing such a character is hard for me because I try to put myself in the characters’ shoes to make the scenes more emotional and alive, and she in this route feels like a doll or a zombie. I can’t empathize with her or understand what she feels. Guys just toying with her, and she likes that. No conflict, no depth, no drama. Plus, the scenes themselves are technically hard to make – there are a lot of people in the scene, which means a lot of fixes on each piece of art to make sure "everything is in its place." That’s why the scenes feel too mechanical and are incredibly exhausting to produce.
In the BBC bimbo route, I had planned at least one more scene where Mila meets Paul and they talk, kind of finishing off the arc, but I just didn’t have the energy to do it. When I return to revising this part, maybe I’ll add something else and maybe try to lit Mila's inner flames to make her "alive" again.
Since you are so good building alternative paths, I would suggest something if you don't mind. You said you feel Mila's personality empty at some point of the BBC route, maybe you could use exactly this hook during the couple conversation, when Mila opens her up to Paul and he decides to support her in some way to make her happy again (this would change the BBC NTR into NTS, but who cares about the nomenclature
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