(game version: 0.4) - Okay, so I'm really torn about this one...
On the one hand, the art is amazing. Unrealistic proportions? Sure. But the characters are at the same time surreal while still feeling weirdly natural. And the sexscenes are hot. Maybe a bit overdone, but it still works.
Yet on the other hand...
My main complaint would be the writing. Or rather, the direction of the writing.
I've been following this VN since version 0.1, and I've been following Serge3DX's comics for a long time now. I love the guy's work, but his writing has a flaw that just keeps coming back. That flaw is that his stories and his characters always become charicatures of themselves over time.
Case in point: Scarlett, the protagonist of our story. She is introduced as a demure ginger girl who has trouble making friends, and who's still trying to make sense of how to navigate life.
That's a good premise for a character. The fact that she's also tall, fit, and a futa with a penis the size of her lower arm makes for quite a contrast. But it still works as a premise. A 'gentle giant'-kind of character, so to speak. And characters slowly becoming aware that they're more attractive than that they thought they were, that's a good plot premise.
...this is where things go awry, though. Scarlett goes from being a virgin (albeit one who's secretly dating her teacher) to a stereotypical porn protagonist who fucks women almost by accident almost instantly. The part where she outright cucks a dude (as part of her job as 'sperm donor') and tells him to bring a towel so his wife can clean herself up is especially jarring.
Even visually, Scarlett is becoming a charicature of herself. If you've got an older version like 0.1 or 0.2 you can see that Scarlett's 3D model was changed. She went from just a regular fit-looking girl to a bodybuilder. Now, I actually like musclegirls - but this was yet another sign that Serge was removing any trace of subtlety from the game.
Then there's another thing that I can't ignore: Serge's earlier comics also happen to feature a ginger futa girl with a huge cock. This earlier futa character, Gina, has an affair with her voluptuous teacher (just like Scarlett) as well as sexual tension with her mom (...just like Scarlett). And that teacher and that mom look so similar that I'm pretty sure that Serge just re-used the same character models...
But hey, Gina is a very different sort of character, right? She's sexually aggressive, super dominant, and really kind of a bitch most of the time. She's Scarlett's polar opposite.
Well, therein lies the rub. Scarlett is becoming Gina 2.0. She's still less bitchy, sure. But in every other regard, she's now basically a Gina with more muscles.
On top of all that, there's also that Serge has a tendency to cram too many ideas into a single project. His ideas are usually pretty good on their own, but... less really is more sometimes, you know?
Each new version adds a bunch of new characters, and while I'm not complaining about additions like the gym trainer (hot damn!), it does leave even less room for depth in the story. That, and earlier characters tend to end up on the backburner because of this.
I mean, Mrs. Jones? My favourite character here. But we're probably not going to see her actually have sex with Scarlett anytime soon, mainly because Serge keeps spending so much time and energy on adding new characters. Irony of ironies, the slow buildup with Mrs. Jones (with all the voyeurism and teasing) actually makes her work better in terms of porn.
The story as a whole is still fun because of how over the top things have gotten. Fun in a 'so bad it's good'-way. But it could have been something better. The potential is definitely there.
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So, my verdict?
It's porn. And it doesn't try to be anything but porn. It's almost like a deliberately over-the-top parody of oldschool porn writing. But it actually works as porn.
And the art is amazing. Serge makes his own 3D models, and you can tell that he's good at what he does. That deserves credit, too.
Even in spite of its flaws and wasted potential, this is still one of those visual novels that keeps me coming back.
4/5