VN - Ren'Py - Abandoned - MILF Story [v0.2] [GMS]

umm just no.

Pro:
It's NTR if you're into that.

Cons:
poorly done cliche ntr corruption of mom
Idiot MC who's also autistic??
Idiot mom. takes nothing to corrupt
renders are poorly done and grainy
ntr friend Jack looks like a toad
there's no build up/corruptions
grammar is poor, no transitions, seams nonsensical almost

I don't believe this can be redeemed without a complete redo and help with writing/translation.

(edited to add spoiler tag)

I'm sorry, I couldn't get through the entire "demo".
Pros:
-Sorta sex scene?

Cons:
- Degranulated drawings
- Non sequitur based conversations
- moving from one scene to the next
- Unrealistic
- Milf seems more like the neighborhood whore
-The MC is just horribly ugly, I can't stand looking at the guy.

I liked the game, even though the quality of the images was not excellent, but I liked the story as well as the main character, especially after I played the second chapter.
I ask you to continue and develop