The following review is based off my personal experience with playing this Game/Visual Novel... I try to be as brutally honest and detailed as I can, and these are my own opinions and thoughts, from one or more play throughs... The version this review is based on is v0.03...
The biggest thing this VN/Game has going for it is the visuals, but beyond that it has lots of issues...
The visuals of the characters appear to all be unique and high resolution... The backdrops are mostly unique looking (a few I recognize from other VN/Games) and also are high resolution... The user interface is well designed with some decent production value added... Such as how activating and deactivating the phone animates, or how simple the Bio system works and navigates... The animations, albeit short, are high resolution and fluid... The only qualm I had during the first animated scene, was how the female characters stomach looked, as it appeared rather alien looking in how the muscles bunched up... Looked a bit unnatural...
The script is ok for the most part, although there were several instances of minor broken English, as well as some spelling/grammar mistakes... You can choose most of the main characters names and their relationship to the male protagonist... But you can tell by how the characters dialogue plays out and their interactions, that it was meant to be setup as a family incest VN/Game... The defaults for the relationships are your landlady and roommate setup, which is very typical of incest conversions... But. no landlady talks to a tenant like they've raised them from childhood, and the other characters fall into the sister roles far too easy for being just fellow tenants...
The whole setup is so cliché and has been used hundreds of times before already... One room mate is mean towards the male protagonist, the other is made out to be a friendly party goer, with the landlady as this overly concerned mother figure who needs some love and tenderness... Then you add in all the typical setups, like peeping/walking in to the bathroom while one of the girls showers, followed by perving on another in her bedroom, followed by the mother figure being overly concerned for the male protagonists future... I mean, what Landlady forces a tenant (someone who is just renting a room in her home, wink wink) to be tutored for college? None, it never happens... She is so much his mother, it's ridiculous... Most of the content follows very similar patterns of a typical overused family incest story (regardless of the attempts to hide it via a relationship title option), that we've all seen already... Which shows a lack of originality...
Then we come to the tutor, who upon arriving, immediately wants to take the protagonist to his bedroom to begin tutoring him... No real introduction, no establishment of trust, no getting to know one another before hand... If I was a female tutor, who didn't know this guy, why would I immediately want to go to the guys bedroom of all places, to do the tutoring... First I would properly introduct myself, then I would want to get to know the guy a small bit, then play it a bit safe and maybe tutor him in the kitchen, or other public space... That whole set of events with the tutor, went by lightning fast, and felt a bit over the top and cliché...
As to the meat and potatoes of this VN/Game, it starts off with a very fast introduction, that leads almost immediately into a, mostly linear, grinder style game play setup... With various locations to navigate to, with certain time slots for each day, with characters only being in certain locations at certain times, along with things like the character having money, and so forth... There is a hint system for each character, but some of those hints are copied across all the characters, which felt like a mistake... And the story elements do not always properly clue you in on the next step... So all you have is the hint system or just random exploration to determine what the next step might be... And even then, the hint may be so vague, you still have no idea what to really do next... I eventually ran out of things to do, as the landlady sat in the kitchen, and no matter where I went there was nothing I could interact with that played along with the hints shown... I couldn't tell if I had hit a content wall with hints that were not fleshed out yet in the content, or if I was missing something...
There were also a few times the names you selected were not used in the text properly, but instead the default names appeared in the text... I also ran into continuity issues, such as where the mailbox looked fixed after you get the hammer but before you actually fixed it... Or how the time of day, was not reflected in each room appropriately... Like when it was dark outside, but sunlight came in through the protagonists bedroom window... Or it looked like it was later in the day outside, but the UI showed it as still the Morning... And a few other things...
The story telling itself, sometimes was ok, but in many cases it felt a bit rushed and/or forced... I find it odd, so much attention to detail was put into some of the visual content, but that same level of attention was not put into visual continuity, story continuity, and the story telling in general... Some of it is just attributable to some mistakes or work in progress... But the general story telling issues I ran into, boil down more to the skill/talent of the writer, more so then just some errors made...
Overall, many of the visuals in this VN/Game are done well, but the story telling, cheap plot devices, and other issues just bring down the overall quality of this VN/Game... No VN/Game can stand on just some decent visuals alone... With the cliché characters, lack of originality with many of the events and story elements, and issues with the fast paced story telling... I almost think this VN/Game may be leaning more towards the Porn Fest side rather then story telling side... There is very little deep or meaningful story, and most characters are either cliche, over the top, or lacking any real substance... Add in, that this looks and feels like just another unoriginal incest VN/Game, with a cheap title changing system, just to seem compliant with sites like Patreon and so forth, and yet the story and dialogue is still played out like a typical Incest VN/Game... The visuals can't make up for everything else, and they are the only reason I'm not giving it a 1 star rating... I applaud the developers for some of their visual designs, but they still have a lot of work ahead with all the other aspects... And as this VN/Game is very early in development, we'll have to wait and see if it fixes it's issues and improves over time... Will I revisit this one? Probably not, but only time will tell...