- May 9, 2017
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A little feedback. First of all, I´m not a nativ english speaker, so sorry for any errors.
Good update.
The game really has a lot of potential. I really like the artwork and the style of the game. Secondly, i like Lilith, It gives you alot of narrative freedom (1). Because the MC doesn't need to push the plot now. In alot of games the MC becomes some sort of pushy dick (because he has to push the plot forward), which can lead to a very unlikable main character. It gives you a ton of freedom for funny and embarrassing situations that even the MC doesn't actually want to happend.
(2) Sofar I like where the story goes and that it has a sence of progession/corruption. Handjob -> BJ -> Titjob - > Pussysliding -> Sex with Condom, Sex with pulling out -> Accidental Creampie etc... One Point for the future: To be honest. I find the risk of a pregnancy more interesting than the pregnancy itself (for expamle: I think Milftoon was to fast on this point).
As for the storylines, as mention in (1), with Lilith you have some narrartiv freedom for different storylines:
Sue-Storyline: Female corruption path with Sue (MC) is sofar actually quite good. I like the side stories and hints/backstory (it makes the world feel bigger).
Trope: Mother activ, the sons passiv. Slow corruption of an female protagonist.
Dennis-Storyline: The first part with Aunt Harriet corruption-path is a good intro, and it helps the get Dennis activ. I think, currently the Storyline has the most content.
Trope: Mother passiv, son activ.
Dalvin-Storyline: It is a good start. I think the dialoge in the bath was way to fast. I dont get why Dalvin gives the game away? What I mean with it? He shouldnt mention the impregnation. If you want to mention it, then do it way, way later. We and Dalvin know what is up, but it gives more tention to find out "How does SHE sells the idea of her son to impregnate her. Or those she even gets open about it at all?"
Trope: Religious mother, son activ.
Dexter-Stroyline: Bitchy reluctant Mom path could be a bit better and could use some more content. Maybe go down the "medical reason" for action route?
Trope: Mother passiv/reluctant, Son activ. Medical motivation?
Milftoon could use the tropes and add and mix them together for each storyline. So that it doesnt feel the same. Passiv vs activ, Religious vs horny, warm-hearted vs bitchy, Male MC vs Female MC.
Food for thoughts:
- As for Helen Parr: I hope more for a warm-hearted reluctant Mom path AND reluctant/passiv son. It would be something new. Lilith could be the driving force of that storyline, with accidents (flashing, downblouse, nipple slip, etc...), happenstance (steps in the room durring mastubation), sex ed talk (gets erection), slip ups (accidental penetration), and so on. You could even add the superpowers as "nerfs", her elasticity leads to clothes mishaps, Violet invisibility leads to a voyeur-scene, Dash superspeed leads to an accidental almost penetration etc.... I dont know if you planned already something?
- Dont know if you know Demon Boy Saga or The Twist? They have a friend how tries to get his mom. I call it: Friend-Storyline. In Demon Boy Saga is it Lucia+Mike and The Twist is it Billy+Rachel. Summertime Saga has this storyline too. Do have planned something like this?
Good update.
The game really has a lot of potential. I really like the artwork and the style of the game. Secondly, i like Lilith, It gives you alot of narrative freedom (1). Because the MC doesn't need to push the plot now. In alot of games the MC becomes some sort of pushy dick (because he has to push the plot forward), which can lead to a very unlikable main character. It gives you a ton of freedom for funny and embarrassing situations that even the MC doesn't actually want to happend. (2) Sofar I like where the story goes and that it has a sence of progession/corruption. Handjob -> BJ -> Titjob - > Pussysliding -> Sex with Condom, Sex with pulling out -> Accidental Creampie etc... One Point for the future: To be honest. I find the risk of a pregnancy more interesting than the pregnancy itself (for expamle: I think Milftoon was to fast on this point).
As for the storylines, as mention in (1), with Lilith you have some narrartiv freedom for different storylines:
Sue-Storyline: Female corruption path with Sue (MC) is sofar actually quite good. I like the side stories and hints/backstory (it makes the world feel bigger).
Trope: Mother activ, the sons passiv. Slow corruption of an female protagonist.
Dennis-Storyline: The first part with Aunt Harriet corruption-path is a good intro, and it helps the get Dennis activ. I think, currently the Storyline has the most content.
Trope: Mother passiv, son activ.
Dalvin-Storyline: It is a good start. I think the dialoge in the bath was way to fast. I dont get why Dalvin gives the game away? What I mean with it? He shouldnt mention the impregnation. If you want to mention it, then do it way, way later. We and Dalvin know what is up, but it gives more tention to find out "How does SHE sells the idea of her son to impregnate her. Or those she even gets open about it at all?"
Trope: Religious mother, son activ.
Dexter-Stroyline: Bitchy reluctant Mom path could be a bit better and could use some more content. Maybe go down the "medical reason" for action route?
Trope: Mother passiv/reluctant, Son activ. Medical motivation?
Milftoon could use the tropes and add and mix them together for each storyline. So that it doesnt feel the same. Passiv vs activ, Religious vs horny, warm-hearted vs bitchy, Male MC vs Female MC.
Food for thoughts:
- As for Helen Parr: I hope more for a warm-hearted reluctant Mom path AND reluctant/passiv son. It would be something new. Lilith could be the driving force of that storyline, with accidents (flashing, downblouse, nipple slip, etc...), happenstance (steps in the room durring mastubation), sex ed talk (gets erection), slip ups (accidental penetration), and so on. You could even add the superpowers as "nerfs", her elasticity leads to clothes mishaps, Violet invisibility leads to a voyeur-scene, Dash superspeed leads to an accidental almost penetration etc.... I dont know if you planned already something?
- Dont know if you know Demon Boy Saga or The Twist? They have a friend how tries to get his mom. I call it: Friend-Storyline. In Demon Boy Saga is it Lucia+Mike and The Twist is it Billy+Rachel. Summertime Saga has this storyline too. Do have planned something like this?
