VN Ren'Py MINA! NTR Phone Story [v0.13a] [DramaticDonut]

[Turret]

I totally get that. While working on that chapter, I already felt that no matter how Jacob ended up looking, there would probably be people who felt disappointed. Let me quickly explain how I chose his appearance though:

Jacob is meant to fill the role of someone who doesn’t just look like a stereotypical bull. He's around the same age, successful, and a genuinely nice guy - the kind of person who can create tension not only on a physical level but also an emotional one.

Given how Mina is written, she'd never fall for a guy purely because he’s rich or buff. The idea that "she might like him for more than just sex" is an important part of his role in the story.

Of course, there’s more to come - other characters might align more closely with your expectations later on.

Thanks for playing & sharing your opinion though

Hi again!
I already wrote about my thoughts of the earlier part in former posts. So right to the new update: Nicely done, better writing than most "phone games", cute pics. I will most definitely stay with this game if the game keeps distinct NTS paths! There is a sea of dime a dozen NTR games, but only few doing NTS right. You have to seriously shepard these rare few.
If "Mina" retains a distinct (no fraking overbleed from NTR crap) NTS path where the MC stays in control of what happens and what can happen, wholesome happy swinging/sharing, I´ll be a happy camper.

 

[turbokinetics]

Hi again!
I already wrote about my thoughts of the earlier part in former posts. So right to the new update: Nicely done, better writing than most "phone games", cute pics. I will most definitely stay with this game if the game keeps distinct NTS paths! There is a sea of dime a dozen NTR games, but only few doing NTS right. You have to seriously shepard these rare few.
If "Mina" retains a distinct (no fraking overbleed from NTR crap) NTS path where the MC stays in control of what happens and what can happen, wholesome happy swinging/sharing, I´ll be a happy camper.

agreed. as long as jacob isnt the harbinger of an ntr bull that shifts it out of nts control. some nts games have a bull that you have to cut loose or it turns ntr but they make it pretty clear and you have the option to cut it off right then and there.
and yeah writing is well done. im impressed although i do wish there were more pictures in this update. she came back to MC for sexy time but all we got was a pic of her sleeping lol i'll live but bummer

 

[Brandu33]

Totally fair it’s not everyone’s cup of tea! Some games manage to pull it off really well though, creating a surprising amount of immersion though. Especially for NTR/NTS stories. Might be worth giving it a try sometime! Feel free to ask me if you need a good recommendation

There is no .sh file in the last version? And let's hear your recommendation.

 

[abirvg]

How much content is in the game right now?
Is there enough for a satisfying playthrough?

 

[DramaticDonut]

Hi again!
I already wrote about my thoughts of the earlier part in former posts. So right to the new update: Nicely done, better writing than most "phone games", cute pics. I will most definitely stay with this game if the game keeps distinct NTS paths! There is a sea of dime a dozen NTR games, but only few doing NTS right. You have to seriously shepard these rare few.
If "Mina" retains a distinct (no fraking overbleed from NTR crap) NTS path where the MC stays in control of what happens and what can happen, wholesome happy swinging/sharing, I´ll be a happy camper.

Happy to hear that!
NTS will always be available if you choose to go that route! Welcome on board and enjoy the ride!

 

[DramaticDonut]

agreed. as long as jacob isnt the harbinger of an ntr bull that shifts it out of nts control. some nts games have a bull that you have to cut loose or it turns ntr but they make it pretty clear and you have the option to cut it off right then and there.
and yeah writing is well done. im impressed although i do wish there were more pictures in this update. she came back to MC for sexy time but all we got was a pic of her sleeping lol i'll live but bummer

I totally get that - it can feel like something is missing if there isn't enough visual proof. Maybe 3 pictures aren't quite enough to cover that long part. Might change that in a future rework
Although, Mina documenting everything while she's just starting to test the waters feels a little off too!

There wasn’t any sexy time included in 0.13 but hey nobody said it didn’t happen.
I've got a feeling 0.14 might have something in store for us!

 

[DramaticDonut]

There is no .sh file in the last version? And let's hear your recommendation.

Whoops, sorry - something got a little twisted there! I've added a Linux download (Mega link) now. In case you don't like mega there's also a download available on my itch.io page!

And: I was about to recommend my own game

 

[DramaticDonut]

How much content is in the game right now?
Is there enough for a satisfying playthrough?

Hey abirvg! So far the game has completed its first arc, featuring 40 CGs (about 90% obtainable in a single run) and plenty of story content. Not sure if that’s satisfying enough for you or not Would love to hear what you think about it though!

 

[MiltonPowers]

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Hey friends!

Version 0.14 will be released on November 14th (total coincidence with all those 14s )! I honestly think this is the best update so far, and I can’t wait to hear what you all think once it’s out!

Of course I’m already working on version 0.15 as well! In preparation, I decided to take a look back at where I started at the beginning of this year and wow it’s really been quite a ride since then!

I’ve attached a picture of “old Nora”, the very first draft I used during the game’s alpha phase. What do you think: should I have kept her original look, or do you prefer the new design?

Wishing you an amazing weekend!

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