Review for [v0.241]
Very impressive game, I'm excited to see more. TL;DR go try it out. Below my impressions in details:
Sex scenes, or rather sex episodes, are very meticulous and multidimensional. I've spent a good hour on some, checking different combinations of choices and prerequisites. Very interactive and.. fun? This doesn't mean that they are very hot though - angles are often weird or obscuring, or renders just not reflective of what's going on. For example, the main lesbian (your sister) doesn't have a single clear shot of her doing cunni, while your "main" gf has at least five. The latter is also supposed to be homophobic by the way.
Story is alright. You are basically thrown into the shoes of a guy who suddenly becomes able to read minds and then just rolls with it. There's some overarching plot in the making, but honestly it's not really exciting. It is there I guess to tickle your mystery. The actual strong point is characters, especially main girls and MC. They feel alive and thought through, dialogues feel natural and enjoyable to read. Now, another bone I have is with overall settings: All of those people are supposed to be virgins, highschoolers or whatever, they even attempt to sound (and think) insecure. But then you get some crazy borderline swinger parties that would make your uncle blush, and don't get me started on the last one. It is hot, but it is ridiculous that it happens.
Gameplay is really good for a VN. It's all in the choices of course, but there is a lot of them and they are always meaningful. I would love to see the monstrosity of this plot tree mapped.
Extra: bad. No music, no effects. Transitions are very bad - when a chapter ends you are immediately thrown into the next action. Sometimes you are shown a weekday or something but it is not trackable and confusing. All these things are flavour, but if were to be smoothed the overall experience would improve significally.