8 / 10
With different visuals, it could be one of the best games on this site.
(v3.5)
Writing is... not what you'd expect looking at these 'low effort' pictures. Certainly not what I was expecting.
It is great.
- Not perfect - there are some problems with the pacing.
...Probably because of non-existent visuals - so everything hot is in the writing. And only writing. Every bit of character building outside of teasing, dirty-talk, and sex-scenes themselves feels like it drags for too long. Precisely because there's nothing to look at during it.
- It's not groundbreaking either - pretty standard NTR tropes for you. Ugly limp-dicked boyfriend, unsatisfied wife.
+ But it is solid. And it is meticulous.
Husband/boyfriend, while ugly and limpdicked - and there won't be any hot sex scenes with them - they are not disgusting. At least they behave like normal, well-balanced, and pleasant people.
Girlfriends/wife, while cheating, they are not disgusting. They are complex, cute, and pleasant to be around. Have interesting past, complicated present, and non-obvious future.
+ Antagonists: not the most intense guys ever, but very meticulous. Don't pull out magic mind-altering machine out of their hat. They have to work for it, plan, and sometimes even fail.
...And I can't remember the last time an ntr antagonist has failed in anything - so yeah, refreshing. Makes the story less predictable.
+ Humor is nice too. Love it.
- Now visuals are... simply horrible.
I don't understand why the author won't just use 3D - Koikatsu or Honey Select if he doesn't have the hardware to render.
It'll literally take less effort, while producing better results.
...Unless he just wants to practice his drawing skills. On us.
Sound:
+ Music's good-ish. At least during sex scenes and intense moments it's great. Normal everyday music could be annoying.
+ There are also some sounds. Blowjob, moaning, and so on. Which is very good. It always adds to the atmosphere and the hotness of the scene.
But.
It's way quieter than the rest of the sounds, for some reason - like the banging of the door that will blow your ears off if you amp your volume for the blowjob.
And it's inconsistent in quality. Which is, I guess, better than nothing at all.
Overall:
Very solid writing that sometimes gives you unexpected curveballs - which is much appreciated in the genre. Feels fresh.
Highly recommend.
And will wait for the author's future works with anticipation. This one included.
//This is my review. Posted here for discussion - cos the review system on this site doesn't allow commenting on it.
